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Happy one-week-belated Easter everyone!
It's been… oof, about a year since my last post. Apologies for that, but a big thank you to all the users that added me to their watchlists in the meantime despite my dire inactivity.
I come bearing more unnecessarily smutty permanent entrapment.
Inspired by this sequence (which is also the source of the thumbnail) by the incredible Kaname,
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/89657636
Which I saw a while back, thought was wholesome while still sexy, then inevitably had additional thoughts of “but what if it went WRONG somehow…?”
I initially wondered if I could do a comic on it, but tbh I wasn’t sure it would ever get finished, so the rough plan got turned into a skeleton draft, and the draft got filled out. A short tale covering four or five key events? Nah, why do that when you could just keep adding detail until you’ve got a story 22k words long? So, here you go.
Blurb:
Shyla volunteers to be unbirthed at a farm where the cowgirls are given these pseudo-pregnancies in order to stimulate higher milk production. This goes well enough at first for her and her host, Tilda, with only a couple of bumps, then goes tits up somewhere down the line, with only Shyla ever knowing just how wrong things went.
Ch.1 – 7.6k words
Shyla fits into her new position.
Ch.2 – 2.7k words
Shyla gets acquainted with her inflight entertainment, finding it more effective than expected, and Tilda appreciates her new friend.
Ch.3 – 7.0k words
Things go wrong.
Ch.4 – 4.9k words
Things continue to be wrong, but at least Tilda (and a random newbie farmhand) are enjoying themselves.
Question:
Before deciding to just post the whole thing, I was thinking about splitting this up into the four chapters (or two halves) and posting one a day. Do you guys prefer it in one go like this? Or do you think having a short break between chapters would make it more engaging?
Feedback always appreciated, enjoy!
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Posted by IndySteveo 1 year ago Report
Lo and behold I have fallen too far. At the of chapter 1 the poor documentation practices made me so mad, that I stopped being horny. I have become the perfect worker drone but at what cost.
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Ahaha, the prevalence of human error is the real tragedy here.
Posted by merelyatoy 1 year ago Report
Fantastic work. Nice slow buildup with a fun scenario, and loving the gradual descent into permanent entrapment and objectification; love to see someone get 'too deep' into a fantasy, and have it overwhelm them like this.
As for your question, I'd prefer to have the whole thing at once. Although 'serializing' works seems to be more common, it's good to see longer-form writing on here - I think it's more engaging than a series of shorter works.
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Glad you liked it :D
And yup, I like the moment of realisation that some poor sucker is in wayyy over their head.
Thanks for the answer too. Feels like making more, smaller posts is a decent way to increase visibility, but I do like having it laid out in one piece.
Posted by Groblek 1 year ago Report
Ooh, fun! Poor Shyla’s in for a long stay, it seems.
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Poor girl indeed, but maybe she'll learn to love it? Eventually. Maybe.
... At least Tilda's loving life, right?
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 1 year ago Report
What a scary outcome
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
The line between horror and the horn is indeed a thin one.
Posted by Apostolos 1 year ago Report
Okay that was amazing, can you do a second one?
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Glad you liked it, but I suspect this may be the end of Shyla's story.
I did have a vague idea for a less vorish ending/extra where Tilda ends up at one of the less welfare-oriented ranches mentioned in chapter 1, and Shyla ends up let out, only to get ensnared by the automated systems of the less free-range factory when it thinks she's a new hucow too, but there's no solid plan to do anything else with this for now.
Posted by Apostolos 1 year ago Report
not sure how i’d feel about that, but what about an afterstory where they give Tilda a medical checkup after 2 maybe 3 years without her giving birth and find out about Sylviain the xray/ ultrasound? Maybe they think she unbirthed one of her fellow hucows?
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Ahh, well, that would probably detract a bit from the permanence of the Permanent Entrapment tag. Besides, if they do find her then what then? The staff didn't get her stuck on purpose, and I'm not thinking they'd be cruel enough to try to cover it up knowing she was trapped, so they'd let her out, and then I don't see many ways forward for the story that aren't just her going to a lot of therapy.
After a while of Tilda not giving birth, sure, I reckon there's the potential for someone to finally work out what happened, probably Jack, but I'm less invested in writing out the details of that part of her story.
Posted by Apostolos 1 year ago Report
Ah okay
Posted by Whatisaname 1 year ago Report
I agree, leaving it here is for the best. Cause there really is only one of two ways the story would naturally end that immediately come to mind. Eventually the farmhands will realize the pregnancy has gone on too long and check up on Tilda. Eventually Shyla will get out.
So either the horny times turn into a courtroom drama with interludes of therapy, or maybe Shyla's gone full feral and lost her ability to communicate. So she'd just look and act like any other hucow at that point. I think that's the best head cannon. Free to live her days as another hucow with all the drama and shambles of a former life behind her. Neither of which sound interesting enough to be worth fleshing out.
Posted by LemonBarb 9 months ago Report
Honestly, I'm going to throw another dark thought if going on a 'darker' take for permanent entrapment. If "stuck for too long led to insanity" leads to Shyla being trapped in a different lens.
Say, there is the courtroom debacle, and a medical drama on how to remove Shyla. So some tests were done to try and assess if she's there? But she either wasn't responding, or her mindset's regressed to 'feral baby' standing.
So, legal courtroom and assessing that Shyla has indeed 'regressed' (mentally, not physically.) Leading to her no longer being classed as 'sentient', might lead to Shyla being trapped in there indefinitely.
As, a possible thought of a 'dark route' legalese could be use, to further enforce that permanent entrapment. And if a hucow doesn't want her baby out at all, and it helps with still producing milk...
Why would the current or new owner with less morality, want their milk to run dry?
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It is of course, a dark thought. But it could be a fun thing to do, if a sequel focused more on what happens 'outside', than inside... And what's known outside, shows just how damned Shyla is in being trapped inside her hucow "mother" for too long?
Mainly, when one's existence is to serve the maternal desires of a hucow. Then that's the existence you're bound to, for however long said hucow desires.
Posted by Harleking31 1 year ago Report
Absolute fire
Take all the time you need to cook this hard Holy shit
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Mucho gracias :)
Posted by Kilrez 1 year ago Report
Hello. The story turned out to be very interesting. Although it still turned out kind of sad. An accident upon an accident without any special action on the part of the cow girl to keep her cutie prey. I do not know how to say... Was there some greater interest missing from the girl's cow and her interaction with her prey? Which makes it not as comfortable as it could be.
Sorry if it came out unclear. I wrote this text using Google translator. I'll be waiting for new stories^^
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
A bit sad, definitely unfortunate. I wanted to do something where someone gets stuck through sheer bad luck, and they have a moment of realisation that their safeguards wouldn't be helping them after all. Everything else just kinda came from that. Not sure what you mean with that question, interest from who?
Posted by Kilrez 1 year ago Report
Interest from a predator. That is, not just keep it inside, but also somehow interact and pay more attention. After all, the beauty of vore is not just the softness and sticking, but also the interaction between predator and prey.
Sorry if I say something strange. It’s just that the way the predator enjoys and playfully does not let the prey get out, happily enjoying the resistance and playfully having fun with it, seems to me much more interesting than just being inside and... Just sitting in a soft sticky trap? With “Hiding place” it was more personal for both participants in this action, which made it more pleasant.
Thank you, and I hope my thoughts are not too strange...
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Ahh, I see. I agree about the interaction between predator and prey being an interesting part of it, this relationship's just a bit simpler than in "Hiding place" etc., since I wanted to do something with the pred being unaware of how the hidden prey felt, and that kinda necessitates limiting communication.
Rest assured Tilda's still enjoying keeping Shyla around, even if they're not as chatty with each other :P
Posted by JeebyHeebies 1 year ago Report
Man I'd really love to give this a read but it's just so long XD
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Well, that's what the chapters are for, break it up as you need :)
Posted by TableManners 1 year ago Report
I've found that premise intriguing since I saw the original work, so seeing it extended like this is excellent. Nice job =)
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
It just had to be done.
Posted by hyperxheadphones22 1 year ago Report
Goat returns and I knew what was planned when I saw that thumbnail
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Tilda's a cow, not a goat! But thank you :)
And shows it's a good thumbnail to get the whole story across with a single pic!
Posted by Custodes 1 year ago Report
Really love this story. Thanks for writing it.
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
And thank you for reading it.
Posted by Whatisaname 1 year ago Report
I absolutely loved this. Took a few sessions to finish it, but I like a story I can come back to several times.
I really like your ability to make it feel so comforting but simultaneously terrifying of a situation to be in. Especially given this time the predator was not able to properly communicate with others, while still being more clever than anyone in world would consider.
Plus, near the end, the love hate relationship Shyla had with her situation struck the perfect chord with me. I wish I was able to grasp the feeling you evoke as solidly. Or consistently.
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
It did end up a bit meatier than initially intended, but what's new? :P
Glad to hear I hit a good vibe; it was definitely supposed to be more comforting at first for poor Shyla, but I just couldn't help myself making it a bit more "mixed feelings". As for the end, being made to enjoy the situation in a way despite some STRONG feelings to the contrary has got to be a special type of hell for the prey, if a bit tricky to put into words...
On a related note, loved loved loved the finale for Diner Dash/Chef's Special. That long, hopeless struggle to resist the inevitable, Hailey's rise to a stronger and stronger power dynamic, her dismissal of her victims as toys more than people, Chef's kiss indeed! Seriously great work :)
Posted by Whatisaname 1 year ago Report
I can definitely relate to that.
It is, but it really does hammer home how varied the community can be. The way people approach what ticks their box can be so different to the point I hardly find it interesting at all. Then sometimes it feels like a content creator knows me better than I do.
Thank you! I was given a loose framework and more or less was left to fill in the gaps myself. I was a little worried with how it would turn out, which led to it taking so long.
Posted by threk 1 year ago Report
Ha, very true there. Feels like the basis for the kink either boils down to comfort/intimacy, or extreme power dynamic, so not much different from most other kinks, but my word, the weird and wild ways people express the interest is unreal. Always fun to find something that aligns with you beyond expectations.
Posted by Lonewolf 1 year ago Report
The return of the king! Another banger
Posted by AverageWizard 1 year ago Report
Need a chapter 5/6 where Shyla gets let out but the hucow hormones make her want to stay at the farm