g4 :: (C) Warm Waterslide by threk

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An anonymous commission wherein a couple of lovely ladies with a slight size discrepancy go to a waterpark, and end up getting closer than they'd anticipated. A bit over 19k words.

Thumbnail is by me, originally intended to be a quick sketch but I ended up putting a background in for a full pic, which I've posted separately here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/843906

This story has actually been completed for a little while now, but I started at a new job almost immediately after, so that's kinda been taking point! A third chapter of Detention is still in the back of my mind, but again, new job, kind of taking priority, especially with the at-home learning I'm being expected to keep on top of. Still, hope you find this enjoyable in the meantime :)

Comments

Posted by Giantess64 2 years ago Report

Another fire story

Posted by threk 2 years ago Report

Happy to hear you approve of the track record :)

Posted by Alabastards 2 years ago Report

Excellent work! You really know how to write this stuff

Posted by threk 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm just writing from the heart :P
Which can go to some interesting places depending on what the heart is into, apparently.

Posted by Harleking31 2 years ago Report

Permanent entrapment is always fire with you

Posted by threk 2 years ago Report

Muchas gracias ^^

Posted by Edddd 2 years ago Report

love the permanent entrapment and how much you went into detail about it, was expecting the story to prematurely end at many points, but you carried it on very nicely, wasting none of the potential of this hot scenario

Posted by threk 2 years ago Report

What's the point of entrapment being permanent if you can't see a little of how it turns out over time ;)

Posted by NewSuperTrios 2 years ago Report

Good point, actually.

Posted by Apostolos 2 years ago Report

Kinda hoping there’s a part two where she manages to get Jane out, maybe Daisy slowly grows faster than her passenger

Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report

Bias wise. If there's a part two to this, I'd not mind if the permament entrapment, slowly morphs into permament fusion/assimilation. Until they're eventually, 'sapient nutriants' or body part/guts for Daisy?

But by that point, it'd likely lead to her having 'sapient' instincts, and how that'd likely lead to more scientific interest/research on side effects for LONG term endo. Especially if the host's body grows/fuses their captives inside them, for a more 'comfortable' eternity...

Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report

Got three things to say, when it comes to your recent story.

First, love it. Especially the thumbnail.

Second, can't help but maybe not be surprised, if Jane would willingly 'merge' with Daisy's intestines. If it happens as a natural 'consequence'.

Thirdly, not directly related to this story. But more your third chapter of Detention...

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I wonder if it'd be a case of Miss Varis, figuring out a means to ensure it's anatomically impossible, for her children to ever leave her body/booty?

That. Or some other narrative plot twist in mind, like getting entrapped herself?

Posted by Arfunkel 2 years ago Report

I second this comment. This story has the potential to follow through with the teasing from "A Smuggler's Salvation" by KittyBoi.

Posted by Slayerhero90 2 years ago Report

Oh, this was delightful!

The linen suddenly skidded underneath Jane as Daisy pushed her up towards the headboard, before falling like a felled redwood towards an unlucky lumberjack.
What a simile! Such a way with words

You do a good job of setting up your twists too; the moment you established the mice as eventually unshrinking I so eagerly awaited when Jane would unshrink at the most inconvenient time!

All in all, absolutely adorable!

Posted by threk 2 years ago Report

I nominate Terry Pratchett as an inspiration for some of the simile word stylings, although I'm pretty sure he never wrote anything in this particular genre... I think.

And I tried not to make the Chekov's gun too obvious, so glad you liked the payoff :P