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A commission for qwertyvore
Whereby a friendly anthro Nidoqueen helps out an unfortunate trainer on the run from Team Rocket, and nothing goes wrong whatsoever.
Thumbnail is by Fdokkaku over on FaF.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39060669/
Shoutout to wordhippo for being the best thesaurus I ever laid eyes on :P
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Posted by KimMadcox 3 years ago Report
Damn, that was hot...
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Glad you liked it ;)
Posted by KimMadcox 3 years ago Report
A lot^^
Posted by Crox 3 years ago Report
Wow... It's been a while since I read a vore story that hooked me so much to read everything in one go, Overaull you did a amazing anal vore story! But man, the mind break stuff and Nadia's denial of Rose's pleads made me hate her a lot (In a good way) later on the story! Also I might be the only one who think this, but I think this story should have been released in two parts, It's a little too long (Though it's also my own fault for reading everything in one go ^^')
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Glad to hear it was compelling :D
Kinda surprised to hear people hating Nadia by the end of it, she's only being helpful after all! Barring the nightmarish situation she "helped" Rose into...
Duly noted about length, it was originally meant to be <10k words but kind of filled out past that as I tried to squeeze every idea from the plan into the story without losing anything :S
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
Poor Rose, if only she ran into someone who wasnt so possessive. Im convinced that Rose and Nadia could have been a thing if only Nadia wasnt so much herself. Oh well, at least Rose is comfortable where she is, even if she isnt entirely there :p
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
In another time, in another place, definitely. Nadia's quite a sweetie usually, she just couldn't resist being a bit selfish at a bad moment...
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
My frustration with Nadia more than anything is how quick she is to dismiss Rose's wellbeing and concerns. Her response is literally just "im being helpful obviously. And if you cant see that then all the more reason for me to help you." Also, the way she was able to take advantage of Rose when she was in a very vulnerable position, essentially forcing her into an unplanned captivity. The hardest part of it all though is just how nice and pleasant Nadia seems to be. Shes what I would describe as an absolute sweetheart.
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Yeah, I like the willing-to-unwilling-prey and permanent entrapment combo, so unless the pred is unaware or also unwilling, that usually means taking advantage of prey in a vulnerable position.
That’s the problem with naive first-time preds though, even if they’re initially well-meaning they’ve never had to face that kind of temptation before.
Posted by Edddd 2 years ago Report
how could she not take advantage of her grumpy little butt plug though? especially knowing its for her best
Posted by AplaceforSTUFFS 3 years ago Report
Jesus Christ, it was certainly hot, But God poor rose. Like Nadia just looks at the poor broken girl and is just like "this is perfectly fine"
Loved the story, hate Nadia by the end, I feel so bad for rose
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
It's apparently a thin line between being mean to a character because it's hot, and suddenly feeling bad because Oh God What Did I Just Do To The Poor Girl.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
Pretty much this, it is very hot through and Rose is at least alive, so there hope.
It reminds me of I keep you safe with the protective long term endo and panicked prey. Through in that story the pred had a lot of remorse, and pretty much the only reason he did not cough up his prey was all his instinct, telling him to endo.
Part of me was expecting Nadia to be a part of team rocket, I wonder if that sparrow ever going to try tracking down her trainer and meet Nadia.
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Not sure I remember that one, (I may have skipped cuz male preds aren’t really my thing,) do you have a link?
And lol, nah, the Spearow gone as gone can be. It did manage to escape the base though.
Posted by Pufferson 3 years ago Report
A lotta "I hate the pred" comments on a unwilling prey story. The pred isnt supposed to be a great person if theyre keeping somebody inside them unwillingly. Thats the whole point of the *unwilling* part.
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
She’s quite sweet really, but she was never going to be the hero of this particular story...
Maybe the overlap between normally nice and monstrously selfish in the same character just causes a bit of a dissonance.
Posted by Pufferson 2 years ago Report
she's one of the nicest preds to an unwilling story honestly, I wouldn't mind bunking with her x3
Posted by James17 3 years ago Report
A lot of people here seemed to dislike Nadia. I in fact, loved her. I do hope "as long as she sees fit" turns out to indeed be forever. Rose seems to be a natural fit in her ass, letting her out would be a shame.
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
I agree! When it feels so right, how can it be wrong? :P
Posted by James17 3 years ago Report
Exactly! Rose will adjust, what is a few years of getting used to being a buttplug compared to a lifetime? Besides, Nadia clearly enjoys it far too much to let her go. She is clearly meant for Pokemon ass, and hey, she's safe! Nothing will ever hurt her again, Hell, no one will ever see her again.
Posted by Lewd 3 years ago Report
Loved it. Wish it took a fatal turn but by all means this was an entertaining read.
Posted by Flameraiser 2 years ago Report
Hope we see more like this! This was amazing
Posted by Apostolos 2 years ago Report
Well.... that was amazing, but I expected an unbirth from the nidoqueen at the beginning, anal was an unexpected but welcome change
Posted by Andaisdet 2 years ago Report
Holy fuck dude… I think this is the best nsfw story I’ve ever read!
I mean like, you did an AMAZING job with this thing!
Posted by threk 2 years ago Report
Aw, thanks, happy you liked it :)
Posted by ben999999 2 years ago Report
Damn, it was super hot all along. At the end, though, I imagined she would pay a “rent in kind” so to speak, taking advantage of the small ano-genital distance in females when her head emerged from her butthole, but it looked like they preferred masturbation after all.
However, I’m not sure how she can manage to, well, go to the toilet while keeping her tenant constantly inside ?
Posted by threk 2 years ago Report
Glad you liked it! Not 100% sure what you mean by the rent in kind, but as for the toilet thing, that's kinda being handwaved with the special "digestion-aiding berries" when Nadia first introduced them as letting her absorb basically all of what she eats so there's no waste left over. Convenient!
Posted by ben999999 2 years ago Report
Well, check this
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Gray408.png?uselang=fr
Do I need to spell out what a butt hanging head can do for a living ^^
Posted by threk 2 years ago Report
Ah, well, pretty sure they come to a mutually enjoyable arrangement, indeed.
Posted by Giantess64 2 years ago Report
sequel?
Posted by threk 2 years ago Report
Was a comm, and I have no idea how I'd continue it anyway so probably not.
Posted by Edddd 2 years ago Report
this was god tier, Mindbreak via the sensiry overload and pheromones is amazing and underused. Nadia was imo perfect, a to Rose well meaning and protective, but utterly overwhelming and inescapable godess... Rose's entire being dominated and permanently trapped merely by another's butthole, thats all her world and her life will be forever now, gosh its so hot... you can see Im trying but I cant fully put it into words <3
Posted by threk 2 years ago Report
Heh, I like it when mindbreak takes a little time to take hold, so slowly being overwhelmed by overstimulation seems like a good way to do it! And with Nadia being so "kind", too...
Your enthusiasm is gratifying, happy to hear you liked it ^^
Posted by aperson1234567890 2 years ago Report
I am wondering how the heck I haven't come across this before now?! Hits so many buttons and is nicely written. Great job!
Posted by threk 2 years ago Report
Heh, well there's a lot of content on this site to get into :P
Happy to hear you enjoyed it :)
Posted by Jareix 2 years ago Report
Late to read, but goodness gracious gotta love this sort of willing > unwilling long term endo scenario, never enough of it