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At long freaking last, the sequel.
Done as a commission for corsper117 it’s a mix of his and my ideas that has basically gone to prove that I can’t stay under a word limit to save my life, made slightly more awkward by the fact that my laptop keyboard stopped working properly partway through, so the vast majority of this was typed with no backspace, tilde, or apostrophe keys. 29k words, this ended up... longer than intended, so is actually subdivided into 5 far more bite-sized chapters.
Varis returns with Hailey and Gemma in tow on her vacation in Greece. She meets new people, enjoys the sights, and finds ways to deal with Gemma and Hailey’s displeasure with their situation when they try to take action.
Heavy smut warning.
Thumbnail drawn by coffeeslice, just found on the rule34 site.
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5705013
Feedback is always appreciated, hope it was worth the wait :)
And a quick question, do people prefer longer stories to be uploaded in one big file, or broken up into multiple posts? Cheers.
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Posted by Apostolos 3 years ago Report
Nice, but admittedly i was kinda hoping she’d get a third “daughter” from Danielle
Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report
Bar some typo's with gappy words and all. I'm on the same boat. Especially if it goes from 'willing', to being permamently 'married' to her body. With her exploiting the two as 'sex toys'... And becoming more/so addicted, she might even tempt her in a manner of 'considering' a permament operation, or something to keep her victims entrapped indefinate and all.
But hey. Nice to see this sequel finally released. Just need to take the time to read and enjoy it in it's entirety.
Posted by Apostolos 3 years ago Report
Hopefully there’s a part three eventually where she gets womb stuffers for Hailey and Gemma, and they slowly become more like Freya with their own toys, bring it full circle yanno
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Yeah, I'm not sure what's up with all the typos, they don't exist in the original .docx I uploaded so I'm not sure where they're coming from.
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Danielle was only ever meant to show up in that first scene, but she kept finding her way back! Who knows, maybe she'll take Varis' advice to heart at some point after this ends and try this unbirthing business out with a friend she can trust. For a given value of trust.
Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report
Assuming, she doesn't willingly instead, want to be 'inside' Varis, perhaps forever (unwilling). Before being kept as a 'warden', for the further torment of 'their' toys, and all?
Or, her growing possibly long term, over a similar 'growth spurt' as Varis, but with the malicious interest in wanting this 'growth' of hers to last indefinately, as a potential 'risk'?
Posted by Strifera 3 years ago Report
I would have liked the characters to more actively try to understand each other. Even in hostile relationships it's normal to try and understand the other party if only to navigate how to react to them. There's a big dependency theme, but they kinda are impersonal toward each other, and it comes across as a weird disconnect.
Otherwise I liked the story a lot. Scenes were varied, and the pred and both preys all get plenty of focus.
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
That's a super good point actually, Varis was meant to be thinking of them a not much more than womb-fillers that she might be able to break in, but now that I think of it I never really had Gemma or Hailey trying to understand her better or ask WHY she was doing this.
Dang.
... Maybe they just assumed she was a bitch, lol.
But yeah, good point, glad to hear you still liked it though :)
Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report
Who knows, if wanting it to spiral to 'complete' stockholm syndrome, if they end up going 'past' addicted, to becoming enslaved/obsessed, or stuck with... complicated emotions/feelings towards Varis, in affection? It might lead to them getting to the point of mentally, not even wanting to 'risk' leaving her womb, at the end of things.
Posted by Strifera 3 years ago Report
Honestly Varis came across as almost as dependent as they are...just less aware of it cause she's in control of the situation. She never refers to them or treats them as replaceable, balks at carrying out her abandonment threat, goes out of her way to establish an incredibly personal mother/daughter relationship with them socially even though that's established as less plausible than something like friends or lovers due to her young appearance, conditions them to want to be involved with her instead of just stepping up security protocols and even unnecessarily tests their faithfulness so she can lessen her protocols, and even tells them to their faces that having them within her is the most emotionally fulfilled she's been since a prior serious relationship.
She basically stopped just short of telling them "You complete me."
She also says she has a life outside of them, but she's upending her life for them, and on top of that they've been inside her for a while and didn't realize that. She's certainly incredibly abusive, but she at no point comes across as being able to do without them any more than they could do without her. She might want them to fill her womb, but she doesn't really objectify them the way you would expect if she was just treating them as womb filler.
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Personally I was just kinda thinking that she’d rather keep her two toys around rather than risk grabbing another from somewhere, hence why she’d put the extra work in to avoid having to abandon one. Besides, if they’re broken in then that’s less work for her in the long run in exchange for a little more work now!
She’s definitely getting a bit dependent/accustomed to their presence though, although she’d of course insist that the only completion they’re providing is physical gratification. How accurate that is... Well, up to you to interpret :P
Posted by Harleking31 3 years ago Report
YOOOOOOOOOOOOO IT'S BACK
Posted by Nerd2114 3 years ago Report
Such a good continuation of the fantastic first story. Every time I thought it would be the end of the story I still had so much to scroll through. Absolutely amazing story!
Posted by ilovevore123 3 years ago Report
This was absolutely amazing, one of my favourite stories ever!
Posted by ssw777 3 years ago Report
Won't lie imaginative snorkeling might be one of the best tags I've seen in this community.
Posted by drunkchipdip 3 years ago Report
Great story! Would love to see an alternative one where Varis had never let them out, and instead kept working on compressing her belly and training her body.
Posted by Restrogenic 3 years ago Report
Fucking phenomenal
Posted by Whereaminow27 3 years ago Report
Dam. I would have loved to see one of the girls manage to get lose, and end up for Varis to have to get her settled back in, but having to eat a few girls and have them listen as she adds them to her body for witnessing what they shouldn't have seen. Then threatening that it could happen to them.
Posted by TheNinja0 3 years ago Report
Can't wait for detention 3.
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Honestly. If thinking back on a buddling relationship. Might be a bit of a twist if Varis ends up being Unbirthed/trapped within say; Danielle. And with her only hope of "maybe" escaping her womb being within the toys she's trapped inside her. Before her 'warden' does some means (surgery or otherwise) to have her 'inside' her indefinately.
But that's a hindsight hunch, on the Entrapper, becoming the Entrapped themselves. Due to lust driven obsessions.
Posted by hyperxheadphones22 3 years ago Report
Thinking of making a part 3? I'd love to see another part continuing from here or an alternate ending where one of the girls intentionally injures themselves in public (like the restaurant) so they can go to the hospital and doctors try to get Varis to do an ultrasound. The secret gets out and then She can either get away with one girl and have the one that escaped try and track her down again some time later or they can both get away to be captured again later. The idea of Varis being on the run while still holding one or both of the girls and narrowly avoiding capture or discovery multiple times sounds really hot.
Posted by JeebyHeebies 2 years ago Report
There's a SEQUEL TO THE GREATEST UNBIRTH STORY OF ALL TIME?!
Posted by RachelBabe 2 years ago Report
Absolutely incredible. I can't wait to see the third one in a few months.
Posted by Erso00 2 years ago Report
I have a very twofold feeling. On the one hand, I like this story, it's really hot. But on the other hand, I am very worried about the fate of the girls and I hate this bitch Varys, and I want her to finally be caught in the end and she got what she deserved. I don't want to offend anyone, but... I feel that way.
Posted by threk 2 years ago Report
Understandable, the unwilling side of this fetish can walk a fine fine between being hot and making you feel bad for the victims.
Posted by Apostolos 2 years ago Report
Hey threk, any chance for a part three? Maybe Freya and her womb fillers later on?
Posted by threk 2 years ago Report
There is a non-zero chance.
I'll be honest, it's been a hell of a year; started a new full-time job, have been attending on-and-off college classes, and even now I'm in the middle of preparing to move house. What private time I've had at home has tended to be shared with the person I live with being in the same room as me, which is not the best environment in which to be writing smut I find :S
Got a different story in the agonisingly slow works actually. Still though, there is a plan in mind for a part three, just, not imminently I'm afraid.
Posted by Apostolos 2 years ago Report
That’s fine, just wanted to ask just in case
Posted by VividLucidity 10 months ago Report
Clearly, the most unrealistic part of this entire story is the notion that there's a plane seat anywhere that could accomodate Varis~
And for that matter, that anyone less than a billionaire could afford it with how airlines are these days.
Posted by threk 10 months ago Report
Ahaha, you aren't wrong. And to add to that, she's somehow affording it on a teacher's salary! World-building's just falling apart here.
Posted by VividLucidity 10 months ago Report
Not as much as Hailey and Gemma's will to resist is falling apart~
Although, speaking of worldbuilding, after Varis's demonstration of her new 'punishment technique, I'm going to imagine that pretty much all of the teachers there began punishing in that way, all looking for any infraction to justify such 'detention'...
But to be serious and finally get to the point: this was a lovely story. It's rare to find a good author here, and you're definitely one of them. And while it's a strange point to focus on, but I quite like how smart Varis is? Just how well thought out her methods of training and control are.
Posted by Apostolos 4 months ago Report
Threk, are you ever planning to continue this series?maybe someone eventually investigates and tracks her down?