Love the scene-setting around the hole, especially the hanging sneakers and trash bin. And always love the way you describe hot, horny guys eager for destruction!
Huffff the story ended so soon, and the mental image of a man instantly disappearing into a red burst under the water's surface is incredible... God now I want to see more, like a puddle invested with these bacteria on a random sidewalk just melting an unlucky pedestrian or something... I wonder if he felt any pain. Is it painless? Is it painful? Or is it in the delightful middle ground where it would be agonizing if there was enough time for nerves to send the signal to the brain before death...
Posted by jefftaur 2 months ago Report
Love the scene-setting around the hole, especially the hanging sneakers and trash bin. And always love the way you describe hot, horny guys eager for destruction!
Posted by BDTFA 2 months ago Report
Huffff the story ended so soon, and the mental image of a man instantly disappearing into a red burst under the water's surface is incredible... God now I want to see more, like a puddle invested with these bacteria on a random sidewalk just melting an unlucky pedestrian or something... I wonder if he felt any pain. Is it painless? Is it painful? Or is it in the delightful middle ground where it would be agonizing if there was enough time for nerves to send the signal to the brain before death...
Posted by KavusKazian 2 months ago Report
Oh I'd love to dive in there!