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A work in progress. A woman inherits a magical set of rings.
F/F F/objects UB.

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drmrblu

Posted by drmrblu 11 years ago Report

I thought this was lost to me.... read it sometime ago and enjoyed the story line immensely. Thanks for story, I hope this adventure will continue. It seems like the friend has an inclination to unbirth the owner without consent, holding her captive while enjoying the situation at the owner's expense, the owner would be at her friends mercy... and faulty memory(just a plot twist)? Sorry can't remember the character names, it has been a while since I read the story, just so happy to find it again. thanks

diamonddraq13

Posted by diamonddraq13 10 years ago Report

What would have happened if Anne jumped herself to the ring (jumped to her own womb)?! :D

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 10 years ago Report

Please, no infinite loops :)
I have no idea really. I think the two sections would wind up blocking each other.

diamonddraq13

Posted by diamonddraq13 10 years ago Report

Just joking :) SoO simply put she just couldn't do that. :)

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 6 years ago Report

My thoughts would be that she would just be stuck, since you can't seem to find your way out on your own. Until someone reached into the other ring laying on the floor and pulled her back through. In the meantime she would feel every movement she makes on the inside as well as the outside. The only part that confuses me, I've no idea how big she would be. I want to shatay she would be the size of someone whose womb contains a person who also has a person in their womb, but I'm pretty sure that's where the trouble comes in and all answers are equally valid / invalid. Probably best just to stay away from all that nonsense, like you said.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 6 years ago Report

Shatay is supposed to be say, no idea how that happened.

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 5 years ago Report

I think this story is what turned me on to the idea of portal-based unbirth. I love it. I too have thought about this. I've tried to imagine being one of these characters: going inside myself and feeling every movement I make, while outside, all anyone would find would be a ring or portal lying on the floor. And until someone did find it, I'd be missing. Even moreso, I love the idea of being trapped that way, with company... and then physics cries.

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 3 years ago Report

I would point out that, since it's technically an infinite loop, she would theoretically have an infinite number of people inside of her womb, and so her belly would be infinitely large.

I kinda want to see a sequel now...

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 3 years ago Report

Actually, having read it again, I don't think she can get into her own belly in the first place; when Anne was wearing the ring, and Mary stuck her feet in, she was instantly sucked in completely, but when they were getting the dildo out of Mary earlier, Mary stuck her hand in, and was able to get it out again with no problems.

Dudeox05

Posted by Dudeox05 7 years ago Report

Although an absolutely fun and great story, I do have to say almost all change is non-magnetic...
Oh dear, damnit, a catgirl just got vored by Angel... I wish I was there to see it, oh well...

Dudeox05

Posted by Dudeox05 7 years ago Report

Wait, Canadian dimes? They're magnetic...

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 3 years ago Report

I wonder what would happen if a man put on the ring?

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 3 years ago Report

I know this is kind of old, but I only discovered it a few months ago, and it's already one of my favourites here on aryion. Have you ever considered writing a sequel? Maybe one where they do some research, and discover other abilities, or even one where they just stick some more stuff in?

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 3 years ago Report

Oh, and when Mary "gives" Anne the first 2 dildos, you slip into 1sr person for a moment.

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 2 years ago Report

I just realised something...

“Can you hand me all the other stuff first?” Anne asked. “I can't look through the ring but you should be able to see my hand.

“Sure. You're going to be amazed when you see what you've managed to fit inside you.”

Sure, assuming she's not already amazed that she managed to fit Mary inside.

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 2 years ago Report

Well whaddaya know.

I'm kinda amazed it took nearly a decade for anyone to spot that.

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 1 year ago Report

Indeed.

Incidentally, please tell me you're planning a sequel? This story is one of my favourites on this site.

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 1 year ago Report

I'm flattered that you like the story so much.

Unfortunately I don't have any plans for any new stories at this time. So I can't really say what I have or had planned as a sequel for this story.