Posted by Jacquelope 15 years ago Report

You know what... if I had seen what Mary had seen I would have swam back to London. Ever seen someone run across water before?

Wow, poor Mary. This story went well beyond well done, it flat out staggered me... jeez.

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 15 years ago Report

Yeah, same here. Though Mary went through a horrible end, she had it coming to her in a way. She should of kept to her own business, but on the other hand, she was just doing her job as a detective.

I'm still wondering about Thomas, I'm kind of glad that he faced what he had done to Amber. It's bittersweet, but I kind of feel bad, as he did warn Sam about an impending trouble. It's all a mystery now.

Thanks for checking out my story. Have you seen the connections between this story and the others?

Posted by Jacquelope 15 years ago Report

I think I am noticing a pattern... there appears to be some kind of vore plague that is spreading, although I did not read the M/M story so I'm not sure.

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 15 years ago Report

The M/M is just a starter. But if you haven't read the second story, you probably won't know about the Joe fella and why he's important. I'm writing my stories in that people will have to read the previous ones to know what's going on.

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Brilliant, again! You're very skilled with characters. They come across as complex and believable, flawed yet (for the most part) not irredeemable. Although cruel vore is far from being my favourite, your stories are among those I admire most.

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 15 years ago Report

Thanks, French. I try to keep it realistic, but at the same time enjoyable. I'm trying to improve with the characters though, because I believe I can venture deeper into them.