Thanks, mate. I spent a lot of time on this story. I had to take stuff out. I had to replace somethings as they didn't make sense at first. Did you notice that this story and others are somehow linked together?
I'm not very good at commenting on stuff but... XD;
From these connected stories I've read so far, this is definitely my favourite. It's been stuck in my head since I read it yesterday, heh. Sign of a good story, right? The characters feel so real, too.
I like Sam, and how conflicted he feels... Poor kid.
I love your writing, it is realistic and believable in a way, the characters especially. I love how dark it is as well. I say a job very well done, I enjoyed it very much.
Posted by Tai223236 15 years ago Report
Wow, great story. Very deep, very detailed, and kinda realistic, apart from the vore stuff. : )
Posted by Gentle_Grounds 15 years ago Report
Thanks, mate. I spent a lot of time on this story. I had to take stuff out. I had to replace somethings as they didn't make sense at first. Did you notice that this story and others are somehow linked together?
Posted by Tai223236 15 years ago Report
Before, I'd have told you no, but now that I see the new story you made....yep. : )
Posted by Gentle_Grounds 15 years ago Report
Heehee. I'm working on another one as we speak. I' trying to get as much done before I return to college, in which I will be busy.
Posted by Very 15 years ago Report
I'm not very good at commenting on stuff but... XD;
From these connected stories I've read so far, this is definitely my favourite. It's been stuck in my head since I read it yesterday, heh. Sign of a good story, right? The characters feel so real, too.
I like Sam, and how conflicted he feels... Poor kid.
Posted by Gentle_Grounds 15 years ago Report
Thanks for the compliment.
Yeah, Sam is rather conflicted, but that is what makes a story interesting. It makes you wonder if he will give in or make a difference.
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Chilling. And very well written. You're definitely one of the best writers when it comes to bringing out the darker side of vore.
Posted by Gentle_Grounds 15 years ago Report
Ha! Ha! Thanks man.
Posted by MidnightRose 15 years ago Report
I LOVE it. Luke sounds hot. XD Underage prey is wrong and awesome at the same time. Still, poor girl.
Posted by Dragonic_Wolf 14 years ago Report
I love your writing, it is realistic and believable in a way, the characters especially. I love how dark it is as well. I say a job very well done, I enjoyed it very much.