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Brenda and Chelsea try a complicated bibliographic procedure to mend the damage to Melanie caused by their disastrous library collection merge.
Also includes a scene I deleted from "Brenda & Melanie #3: Breaking Chelsea" when I decided to take the story in a different direction.
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Posted by jkssmtrfkr 15 years ago Report
Very interesting story - reminds me a bit of the Librarian trying to manage the books at Unseen University. But less hairy.
Posted by iliapoerion 15 years ago Report
Huh.
It is interesting to see a little of the process you go through....
Though I must say that I'm glad that the whole book-binding arc is over (or at least almost over).
That took submission/dominance to a level that I am not... comfortable... even thinking about.... *shudders*
I dunno. Something about books.... which are my friends... which are everyone's friends, at least everyone who reads them.... and causing someone pain....
Something inside of me just rejects that combination. It just shouldn't be... Books don't hurt people.
It was interesting as an idea... but... your stories are too well written to just be Ideas. They make little worlds, and I dunno... I felt sympathy for Melanie, Chelsea, and Brenda... and... *shakes head*
I dunno. It is hard to express this. Let's just say that I hope you get back to slightly more traditional forms of vore now.
Good writing, as usual.
P.S. Why is vore underlined? Is it misspelled? Why does this website, of all websites, not know that vore is a word?
Posted by Throat_Wolf 15 years ago Report
1) It's not the books that were causing someone pain. It's BEING the books. I imagine I probably wouldn't enjoy being books either.
But Melanie actually DID enjoy it. For a while. It's just that Brenda didn't know when to stop. (Which is kind of like me, in a way. Sometimes I don't know when to stop either. Not in imprisoning friends as book collections, but just in general.)
2) It's not this website, it's your browser.
Posted by Tahg 5 years ago Report
As I'm going through these stories, it's dawned on me that perhaps most of the stories in the series should have the mind control and/or telepathy tags added to them. It's at least a recurrent theme for the universe.