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This is the first story in the Tales from the Dreamscape series (which never continued) in which Kari finds her way into a fantastic new world.
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Posted by dimensione510 15 years ago Report
This was great, I loved the suspense inherent in an unknown world.
Posted by fholgore 13 years ago Report
I found it pretty good your first story I'd like you to follow so
Posted by French_snack 13 years ago Report
It does have an interesting dreamy feel. Nice work.
Posted by Justin Bailey 13 years ago Report
Hopefully if I ever get around to finishing the follow up, it'll be better. This was my first vore story and I originally intended to not take it very seriously and have it just as a parody of vore stories that got straight to the vore. I changed my mind about that pretty quickly... but I still took the lazy way out of introducing the character.
Also, I almost never read things I've written beyond an initial proofread, so I apologize if it's bad and thank you for reading if it's not. xD
Posted by CybeastFalzar 12 years ago Report
Love your avatar. Ouch. (heh-heh.)
Posted by Justin Bailey 12 years ago Report
^_^ Thanks! I played a lot of NES Metroid as a kid, even though I had no idea what I was doing at the time.