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Story 48 - part 2 By French_snack -- Report

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Part 1 is here:
http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=182867

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Krauser

Posted by Krauser 15 years ago Report

Hooray! Another amazing story, it just keeps getting better and better. Its interesting to see how everyone adapted to Calina's presence. I was wondering what would happen to Calina, you made very good use of suspense. Can't wait for the next one.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

vore111

Posted by vore111 15 years ago Report

as i say you make me happey this day when i read it
& iam waiting 4 the next story

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Krauser

Posted by Krauser 15 years ago Report

I was wondering how Milly cant sympathize with Isham, considering how mad she was when she though Calina ate one of her tomthumbs... wouldn't she understand that that's what its like for him when she eats humans?

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

That's an interesting point. It simply hasn't occurred to her.

Besides, she has a personal connection with the Alsumi. Whereas Isham wants to "defend" ALL humans (and nekos).

Cicatrix_Manet

Posted by Cicatrix_Manet 15 years ago Report

Amazing, as always.

By the way. Is french your first language? Because if it is, your english is phenomenal.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thanks.

French and English are both my first languages; I was raised bilingual. So I can't take any credit there.

oishi1

Posted by oishi1 13 years ago Report

very rich character depth. I like seeing how a vorephile would be understood in felarya.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 13 years ago Report

Thank you. I liked the slight irony of it.

fholgore

Posted by fholgore 11 years ago Report

Very good story I really liked,
look in your gallery but found no more stories after this which are tan and calina
there are more stories about them?

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report

Thanks. In subsequent stories, Calina appears only as a secondary character. Calina and Tan appear together at the start of story 75. Calina also appears briefly in stories 50, 62 and 111.

kokeman

Posted by kokeman 10 years ago Report

I love all the sruff between Tan and Calina, may we see more?? If she can get him back up she might finnally swallow him sometime...

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Heh, that's cruel. :p I haven't got anything further planned with them at present, but maybe some day…

kokeman

Posted by kokeman 10 years ago Report

Well that would be amazing ^^ and I don't think it would be cruel, you see it's what they both want, and after a little time she would let him out so they can keep playing. It's perfect! XD