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Story 50! This one is about Joanna - the little snackagirl who arrived in Felarya and settled among tomthumbs. Although I consider her one of my major Felaryan characters, she's mostly been lingering in the background; not any more. Here she takes centre stage.
This is a Felarya story, but it's also a snackagirl story - giving us, at last, a glimpse into the existence of snackas before they're sold as sugary treats.
Joanna was previously the focus of a short story, where we see her interaction with Tina:
http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=171308
As a reminder, if you haven't done so yet, you can vote to decide what my next story should be. The vote will close in a few hours:
http://aryion.com/forum/blog/French_snack/choose_my_next_story_b-5729.html
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Posted by Krauser 14 years ago Report
It's nice to see character development, this was a very well written story. I wish there was some vore, but I guess you couldn't of written such a detailed story focused on character along with factoring vore into it. When the slug girl said she had eaten something earlier, I thought that might of been Nedret.
On another note, will you be focusing on the stories voted on in the poll from highest to lowest? Or are you just going to do the one with the highest votes.
Can't wait for the next story
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Yes, sorry about the lack of vore. I felt it would have seemed forced here. But don't worry; whatever my next story is, there'll be vore in it. ;)
My next story will be whichever idea has received the most votes, but after that... I'm not sure yet. I could go with the second most popular, or I could open a new vote.
Posted by Epicurus 14 years ago Report
I have to say that your Felarya stories are interesting in spite of, not because of, the vore -- it needs to be consensual for it to be a turn on for me. You make the characters interesting and describe the setting enough to make it real.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you! That's what I was hoping to do; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by Krisexy 14 years ago Report
jtadore!!^^
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Bah, merci! :)