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When one of Strax's friends gets his heart broken by some woman Strax thinks its about time to get even. Its a shame that Sky had planned on a date with Jill, a two for one deal if you will. ^_^
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Posted by MrPandaBear 15 years ago Report
I remember this
Posted by Straxacore 15 years ago Report
I edited it and made it better
Posted by MrPandaBear 15 years ago Report
Ah.
Posted by Straxacore 15 years ago Report
I hope you Still like it
Posted by MrPandaBear 15 years ago Report
I probably will.
Posted by Straxacore 15 years ago Report
Good ^_^
Posted by Reiko 15 years ago Report
Wow o.o this was amazing! Really sexy! You should be feel proud for such length and detail x3
Posted by Straxacore 15 years ago Report
Thanks. I wrote it a LOOONNGG time ago. But I found it yesterday and spent most of the dday editing it. I am pretty pleased with the result ^_^
Posted by LordVengeance 15 years ago Report
Three for one, really, if you think about it.
Posted by Straxacore 15 years ago Report
^_^ Very true. So an even better meal. Full of everything a pred could want.
Posted by LordVengeance 15 years ago Report
Yes, everything... EXCEPT PUDDING! (unless Strax doesn't like pudding. Then it's everything. lol)
Posted by Straxacore 15 years ago Report
She likes everything and anything. And she did have pudding. A nice ice cream on the way home.
Posted by LordVengeance 15 years ago Report
WOOT! Ultimate meal is COMPLETE!
Posted by Straxacore 15 years ago Report
Now for another one ^_^
Posted by Houyo 15 years ago Report
It was a hot story, but it kinda depressed me and I felt really bad reading it. It was just too dark for me and I couldn't really enjoy it.
:<
Posted by Straxacore 15 years ago Report
Well then don't read it again ^_^
Posted by skydust10647 14 years ago Report
Ooh, fun fun.
this is a really good story, my compliments to the artist
;3
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Thanks cutie ^_^ Any part you liked the most?
Posted by skydust10647 14 years ago Report
I think I just liked the ferocity of the tone overall, really
X3
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Well I can be a very cruel pred when I want to be ^_^ And I do love the taste of catboys
Posted by skydust10647 14 years ago Report
Mrow..
*flicks ears*
Well I can't promise I'll go down easily. I put up quite a struggle sometimes.
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Awww cutie. I would have it no other way. A nice strong wiggling meal makes me feel oh so good ^_^
Posted by skydust10647 14 years ago Report
*pounces up on your lap*
are you sure you can handle me..? I bite back sometimes..
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
*strokes your cheek and licks my lips* I am sure I can handle you little one. You wouldn't be the toughest person I have eaten today ^_^
Posted by skydust10647 14 years ago Report
*purrs..*
mind testing that out...? I'm little, but I'm a fighter.
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Well now what did you have in mind sugar? ^_^ I could always use more fat on my thighs
Posted by skydust10647 14 years ago Report
mmm...and elsewhere for sure..
X3
You can always send me a Pm, email, text message-
you name it.
*swishes tail*
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Alright cutie. Send me a PM and we can talk about your final resting place ^_^ But I have to sleep. Even a man hungry pred like me still has work in the mornings.
Posted by dannny25 14 years ago Report
Can't stop reading it i love your evil ways they are just so sexy
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
I am glad you like me evilness ^_^ Play your cards right and I will show it to you first hand ;)
Posted by Champion Cynthia 14 years ago Report
This was a very nice story : ) Feisty predators are always okay in my book.
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. I have a lot of other stories that need editing with a pred just as feisty ^_^
Posted by Champion Cynthia 14 years ago Report
Oh ja?
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Yeah ^_^ wolfing down helpless little human snacks
Posted by Champion Cynthia 14 years ago Report
Gasp :O Any f/f? 'Tis my preference.
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Most of them are F/f ^_^ Fan of the pred girls hmm? What are you? Tasty prey or tasty pred :)
Posted by Champion Cynthia 14 years ago Report
Prey, I suppose o.o
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Well now. That makes you very interesting. ^_^ I'll just have to nibble on you sometime.
Posted by Champion Cynthia 14 years ago Report
Hit me up with a PM sometime?
Posted by Sempai13 14 years ago Report
I loved this story! (I saved it in fact!) I love the details even to the bitter end- what a way to go x3
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
I am glad you like it ^_^
I have a few more on my computer that I need to edit. What was your fav part?
Posted by Sempai13 14 years ago Report
Umm favorite part I like the end I think the best with the detailed digestion and post-vore stuff :3 always love a good ending done right ;]
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
well then you will like a lot of my other work then ^_^
Posted by Pieper 14 years ago Report
This story is well written, I female predators and female prey unless it is me being the prey, of course. The anal or tail vore here was a new one for me and you can never go wrong with oral. Only thing I didn't like was the fact the Jill was pregnant. Call me a softy I guess, but I don't like hurting the innocent. But that's just my preference. Overall, very well done. Great description of both vore accounts!
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Thanks hun. Glad you liked it ^_^
Posted by Eurodex 14 years ago Report
WOW!!!! I am not usually the one who likes to read vore stories, but I have to say I am very glad I read this one. Keep up the great work ^_^
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Thank you ^_^ I am glad you liked it. I worked hard on this one, and my many others. I hope youread more stories in the future :)
Posted by Eurodex 14 years ago Report
I plan on it ^_^ Thank you again for the story.
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
You are welcome. I always love to hear from a fan ^_^
Posted by Eurodex 14 years ago Report
*blushes*
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
Maybe you can come round and I can show you how much I like to hear from you * licks lips*
Posted by Eurodex 14 years ago Report
What do you mean *looks interested*
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
^_^ come back to mine and I'll show you.
Posted by Eurodex 14 years ago Report
*follows*
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
* Locks the door and pounce snuggles*
Posted by Eurodex 14 years ago Report
*nervous but blushes*
Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report
* nibbles on your neck and purrs* You're mine now hun
Posted by 101danmnations 13 years ago Report
Great story!
Wouldn't mind reading it over and over again! :3
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
Well be my guest ^_^ I would love for you to read it over and over :D
Posted by 101danmnations 13 years ago Report
Yes,over and over again. ^.^
-sits and reads again,his tail wagging as he did.-
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
What is it you like about my story hmm? ^_^
Posted by 101danmnations 13 years ago Report
I'd have to say the tail vore. ^.^
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
I like that too. ^_^ I do love to eat people with my tail
Posted by 101danmnations 13 years ago Report
Oh really?
Your not gonna try and pull a sneaky one on me are you?
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
Well of course I will tasty. Why do you think I wouldn't :p
Posted by 101danmnations 13 years ago Report
-he blushes and back up some.-
B-because my fur is thick...I'll make you fat...
-he chuckled nervously as his tail went between his legs.-
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
Silly little puppy. I will work you off in less than a day :)
Posted by 101danmnations 13 years ago Report
-he chuckled nervously.-
Your joking..your not really going to eat me?....are you?
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
Sure sure. What ever make you feel better ^_^ Or not
Posted by 101danmnations 13 years ago Report
Now your just messing with me. :O
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
Yes I am. I do with all the food that slips into my belly
Posted by 101danmnations 13 years ago Report
Well,I won't go down without a fight.
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
I liked the last part...I guess the demoness isn't quite designed to digest cloth
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
Nope, there is enough fiber in her diet already :D
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 13 years ago Report
That was awesome.
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
I am really pleased you like it :)
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 13 years ago Report
I love pregnant prey! I wish more people would write or draw it.
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
Its a touchy subject due to the underage prey aspect of it
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 13 years ago Report
I guess it is, but it's still hawt.
Posted by ButtPlug 12 years ago Report
You admitting that makes me admire you all the more.
Posted by DenethorN 11 years ago Report
This was so so evil but also sexy, I love it!
Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report
Evil? No no no. I was just hungry
Posted by DenethorN 11 years ago Report
I understand ;-) One meal and then two in one meal... I mean who could resist :)
Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report
Not me ^_^
Posted by Suibelly 11 years ago Report
I loved this. It would have been fun to read about the last girl getting crushed and melted, but it was awesome anyways.
Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report
I am glad you liked it ^_^ I am usually into that but at the time I wasn't that confident in my writing.
Posted by Suibelly 11 years ago Report
Ah, I know the feeling.
Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report
Now I have no trouble with writing about the terrible fate of my food... I mean my characters food
Posted by endlessDespair 10 years ago Report
I keep coming back to this one. Easily my favourite piece on this site. Great work.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
I am so pleased you like it. And quite a compliment thank you. :) I have. Been thinking of updating this story and bringing it inline with my newer ones.
Posted by endlessDespair 10 years ago Report
You're most welcome, thank you for creating such great work. I hope by 'update' you mean 'sequel'? ;)
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Possibly. I just need to think of a story. One of many I have to write.
Posted by endlessDespair 10 years ago Report
Easy! Just as Strax goes to leave the apartment, people keep showing up on the doorstep and she has to keep eating them! j/k ;)
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
But the. She will get too fat to hunt properly. My press need to watch their figure.
Posted by Dolsilyol 9 years ago Report
Absolutely, sinfully, decadently peer evil. There are just so many things I love about this story, but the most that sticks out is Strax. It's so very, very rare to find a predator or prey that's actually into pain. Digestion, sure, but actual pain beyond that? Nope. Hell, even a lot of hard vore likes prefer a quick crunch then gone.
Not that I don't like soft, fun, non-fatal vore, that's a ton of fun as well, it's just, like I said, rare to find a story/Rp partner that does pain well.
Anywho, excellent story!
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
Strax is one of my main characters ^_^ she is my oldest one, in rl and in lore I guess. Fun fact, she started off as a south park character creator character ^_^ And yes, I like pain in my stories. Prey is food and food is suffering. It's no fun without suffering
Posted by Dolsilyol 9 years ago Report
Hah! Suffering is indeed excellent! Also, that IS quite interesting!
Posted by Helvetios 8 years ago Report
So happy to find you had a piece with pregnant prey! Fantastic work!
Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report
I sure did. This is a very old story.