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James met a great girl while on the net. She was perfect in every way except she was hungry and had a taste for roleplayers ;)

This was written as a birthday present for the fantastic Mr. Iddi.

Happy birthday kitten x

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Gloom

Posted by Gloom 14 years ago Report

Hehe, poor Iddi gets to go straight to a very nice, shapely butt ^^

It's a nice girl-on-boy munching story, and I like it a lot that you use a realistic setting for it ~

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Thanks hun. I am glad you liked it. I worked hard on this one. Oh and Gloom. You're next on my list :D

Gloom

Posted by Gloom 14 years ago Report

You did a sweet job on it as always ^^
*Blushes* Oops.. should not have said anything ^^;

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Yes you should. Know you will be turned into cow food. Beef for all :D

Gloom

Posted by Gloom 14 years ago Report

Oh shit...
Guess one should not talk about ones more unhealthy fantasies around you. Especially not when cattle farms are easy access ^^;

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Thats right. A lesson you should of learned by now ;)

Gloom

Posted by Gloom 14 years ago Report

You should know I never learn. Not even from fatal mistakes ^^

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Thats because you enjoy them so much ^_^

Gloom

Posted by Gloom 14 years ago Report

... Possibly ^^;

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

I know you do. And you know I know you do too

azza3695

Posted by azza3695 12 years ago Report

if u did a unbirth like this ...:)

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 12 years ago Report

Maybe in the future :)

Mr_Iddi

Posted by Mr_Iddi 14 years ago Report

Awww~ You're way to sweet to me.

Thanks a bundle =D
Love it, been a while since I saw anything you've written, so Im very flattered to see that my b-day could make you create something new ^^

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Well I just had to do something for you. You are always so nice to me. But next time give me a little more warning so it can be ready on the day. :)

Mr_Iddi

Posted by Mr_Iddi 14 years ago Report

Well you got a whole year's worth of early warning right now~ But I getcha, hehe ^^

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Lol I will forget and you know it. I suck at dates and stuff

Mr_Iddi

Posted by Mr_Iddi 14 years ago Report

Heh, well I'll try and keep it in my head to remind you then..

But only if you return the favor.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

I am sure I will
^_^

cutdeep

Posted by cutdeep 14 years ago Report

Sigh. Heh I would get back from work just after you post this and go to bed.

Ahh well...its amazing Lovely one.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

I am glad you liked it ^_^

UltimaSlash

Posted by UltimaSlash 14 years ago Report

Huh. This is an interesting story. Nicely done.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Thanks. I hope you liked it

steven1950

Posted by steven1950 14 years ago Report

*claps*amazing story love it

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Thank you :)

Bright

Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report

I liked the story. Especially the descriptive qualities of it.

I almost expected her to say something about her guild during the eating process. In any case, it was quite the enjoyable read from beginning to end.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

I am glad you liked it ^_^

Gypa

Posted by Gypa 14 years ago Report

It is bit a shame that he didn't take her eating habits into the account of meting her he would have enjoyed there enconter lot more, I know I would if I met Lexxy.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Lol well Lexxy does get very very hungry :)

Gypa

Posted by Gypa 14 years ago Report

Well then if you don't take Lexxy's eating habit into account if you met her and she wants to and eats you, I think you can only blame yourself if you get upset over it.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Yes indeed. But Lexxy does hide it from her prey. No one ever thinks that she will eat them

Gypa

Posted by Gypa 14 years ago Report

Hum, lets say that there was a witness that saw what see just did and that witness wants be next would she eat the witness?

ButtPlug

Posted by ButtPlug 14 years ago Report

Oh, that was wonderfullipocalexilemplary!

I came two loads!

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

^_^ I am glad you loved it so much

ButtPlug

Posted by ButtPlug 14 years ago Report

I'm glad too, but then I knew it was going to be delicious... you know, since you wrote it~♥

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

Yeah. And I am a pretty darn amazing :)

ButtPlug

Posted by ButtPlug 14 years ago Report

Oh you~ (¯w¯)/

deleteduser301

Posted by deleteduser301 14 years ago Report

So amazing ^^

What a lucky birthday present to receive, I guess that beats popping out of a cake ^_<

I wish I got b-day gifts like that! lol

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

I bet lots of prey want to have a birthday gift like that :) maybe if you are very lucky you will meet the same fate

deleteduser301

Posted by deleteduser301 14 years ago Report

Well seeing as how my luck is usually very good I hope that it does not waver in it's natural pattern that way I'll be able to experience your natural eating/digestion pattern ^_< hehe

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 14 years ago Report

I am sure you will get to have fun wuth my bum then ^_^

deleteduser301

Posted by deleteduser301 14 years ago Report

Sounds fun! ^_^

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report

Good story, particularly liked the end :3

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report

Glad. I did it for a friend :)

RenicofVore

Posted by RenicofVore 12 years ago Report

he had a better birthday than i, i just spent my 22nd birthday alone

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 12 years ago Report

Awww sorry to hear about that hun :( No one should be alone on their birthday. I know how it feels. If any of my preds were there they would of shown you the greatest and last night of your life ^_^

RenicofVore

Posted by RenicofVore 12 years ago Report

That would be fun :D

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 12 years ago Report

Well now. I am sure you think that now but when it comes down to it all my food begs for mercy

deletedaccount505

Posted by deletedaccount505 12 years ago Report

Wow, 45 comments, 49 favorites, and 5,000 views. Utterly amazing.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 12 years ago Report

Thanks ^_^ I'm very pleased with how people like my work

deletedaccount505

Posted by deletedaccount505 12 years ago Report

It's amazing. It was a blow to my ego. = D

But after reading your stories I see why.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 12 years ago Report

I'm glad you like them. I like your stories too ^_^

deletedaccount505

Posted by deletedaccount505 12 years ago Report

= D

architectap12

Posted by architectap12 11 years ago Report

this is the sexiest vore story i have ever read

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report

Why thank you. :) That's so nice. What did you like about it?

architectap12

Posted by architectap12 11 years ago Report

i love the detail, the dominance, and the way you write, as in no grammatical errors, really descriptive and all of that, plus i very much envy the prey :P

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report

Thanks. I am glad you like that :D And no grammar errors? that doesn't sound like me, I'll have to put some in. And you envy the prey, so you want to end up on my hips?

architectap12

Posted by architectap12 11 years ago Report

i didnt notice any errors, and yes i do ;)

architectap12

Posted by architectap12 11 years ago Report

very much so

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report

Well I am sure you wouldn't like it if it really happened now would you hmmmmm? :)

architectap12

Posted by architectap12 11 years ago Report

maybe i would, would you like it if it really happened?;)

architectap12

Posted by architectap12 11 years ago Report

me ending up on your hips that is

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report

But that would mean you are no more and my butt would no longer fit in my clothes

architectap12

Posted by architectap12 11 years ago Report

im definitely okay with that

architectap12

Posted by architectap12 11 years ago Report

you can have all my stuff and use my money to buy new clothing

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report

That sounds like a great deal to me

architectap12

Posted by architectap12 11 years ago Report

me too, that sounds awesome

nauczyciel

Posted by nauczyciel 10 years ago Report

ever thought of doing non-fatal unwilling? the prey forever to belong to the pred type of deal

love your stories btw, this one ive read three times

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report

I have thought about doing that a few times. Just need the right story for it. I am glad you like my stuff so much :)

nauczyciel

Posted by nauczyciel 10 years ago Report

ps: eat me anytime. i'll put up a fight. itd be boring otherwise, no?

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report

Very boring. I do so love when my food fights back. :)

Dolsilyol

Posted by Dolsilyol 9 years ago Report

You know, I have my suspicions that you're a sorceress, because I refuse to believe that non-magical stories could capture, and keep, my attention the way yours seem to do. Seriously though, you're a excellent author!

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report

Well I don't like to brag but maybe I am ^_^; I am glad you like my stuff though.

joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 9 years ago Report

Crazy after all this time, this is by far, one of my most favorite stories.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report

Well I am glad you like it ^_^

CakeInferno

Posted by CakeInferno 8 years ago Report

Love how you described her stomach stretching when his feet entered it, oh my~

Quite a lovely story, despite its age! C:

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report

I am very pleased you liked it. A pred should be like this. Don't you agree little cake

CakeInferno

Posted by CakeInferno 8 years ago Report

Yep, certainly agreeing there, she had a lovely attitude! ;///;
Gonna read my way through your gallery through the next days!

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report

Aww. Well I hope you lik some of them :)

UserMan90

Posted by UserMan90 5 years ago Report

!

LemonBarb

Posted by LemonBarb 4 years ago Report

Looking back in hindsight, I didn't knew until now that the very start of the second sentence, it had an ominous foreshadowing, of the digested victim being cursed in advance.

So in that context, really can't help but love how it was written in a "you are already damned" tone from the very beginning.

Straxacore

Posted by Straxacore 4 years ago Report

One of the first things I ever wrote.