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Tom likes to hunt for his food like any pred, but unlike most he uses the internet as his weapon. Lilly had no idea the person she had been speaking to was leading her into a trap. One that she would never escape from.
This was written for my Bunnie :) I hope you love it.
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Posted by Bunnie 13 years ago Report
Of course I love it (:
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
:) Well you know who insipred the prey :)
Posted by Bunnie 13 years ago Report
unfortunately ;)
Posted by Gelenor 13 years ago Report
Aww no post vote scat. Other than that though it was great.
Posted by Gulpo 13 years ago Report
It's been edited or maybe you missed it:
Beginning sentence of final paragraph: "Lilly spent a couple of days laying around inside Tom until she finally wanted to leave and being such a gentleman, Tom obliged and sent her on a little ride into the sewer never to be heard from again."
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
I didn't put too much description in but at least its mentioned ^_^
Posted by Gelenor 13 years ago Report
I would consider that more like implied than actual post vore scat.
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
There was a brief amount of it. But it was after he ate her not after he voted ^_^
Posted by Gulpo 13 years ago Report
I managed to read the story without properly reading the description or tags. The result was kind of disturbing.
Oh well... *eats Tom*
Posted by Straxacore 13 years ago Report
I hope you liked it regardless :)
Posted by Gulpo 13 years ago Report
I think it was actually a pretty well written story with a triumphant villain protagonist. Plus the thread allows me to make a comment like the one I made above (note second line).
Posted by htt71 12 years ago Report
very well done, I've alwayes liked your work. keep it up ^_^
Posted by Straxacore 12 years ago Report
Thanks :)
Posted by BardicLasher 12 years ago Report
I really liked this story. And the last line gave me a chuckle.
Posted by Straxacore 12 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it ^_^ I normally don;t write this stuff but I wanted to this time. And that last line was what gave me the whole idea ^_^
Posted by Chameleonette 11 years ago Report
The ending line really brought everything around full circle. Very clever! I enjoyed the story a lot. :)
Posted by Straxacore 11 years ago Report
I am glad you liked it ^_^ It was the first time I have written a male pred. I have another story in the works but I just need to edit the thing.