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Three friends go out for a day of fun, but the truth of the relationship two of them share is revealed by a horrible accident to the third.
This is the finalized second draft of this story freshly uploaded. I now suggest all reading of this story be directed to this copy/draft.
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Posted by dannny25 14 years ago Report
yay first comment~ still have yet to read it gota find time. thought i cant wait to read~
Posted by Jacquelope 14 years ago Report
That last part had my sides aching with laughter!
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
That was actually added on in the third revision as a "well I know I'd snap at some point", I being the writer themselves, lol.
Posted by KinoTheCat 14 years ago Report
(thought I should comment here instead of spaming your general page shoutbox :3)
You are most welcome for the fav, this story was one of those stories that once started, I couldn't really stop reading. I loved the many different literary styles you incorporated, and how I didn't see the very first part foreshadowing something I don't know.
I truly loved this story. <3
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
*bows deeply*
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. It was a joy to write and to "emergency" edit. And your comment to the foreshadowing is something I have been waiting months to hear something about. Thank you most on that note ^^
Posted by KinoTheCat 14 years ago Report
Mm, well I guess it helps that I'm taking a class on literary analysis to notice things like the foreshadowing. x3
And I really like how during the story you made the reader, or at least me, grow attached to the characters. Having not noticed all of the tags, I was quite worried Anya was going to die somehow.
The ending was quite funny too <3
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
That is the one problem with tags, they can spoil some of the mystery inherent in many stories.
I'm glad I was able to draw you in deep enough to actually fear for a character. That means I did at least a passing job writing this.
Thank you. And I hope you get an A for literary analysis ^^