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Striper and Sandra are pitiless preds, willing to sacrifice others to fulfil their vorish interests. Sandra is probably the worse of the two, callously sizing up her victims before feeding. This time it's a fellow stripper. F/f, mild sex, soft vore, lots of pontificating about preparing for and concealing your activities when you're a vorish predator living in a world of humans who'd lock you up or kill you if they knew what your 'hobby' was.
Note: I wrote this on my Droid while at a farm, as I didn't have even a netbook at hand. 83
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Posted by Rulke 14 years ago Report
A very interesting look into the view point of a predator in a human world
That is really quite interesting, you get a feel for what it might be like for those two to exist in a human world
Excellently written as always
Posted by Strega 14 years ago Report
Thank you. It's a cruel story, as most NC vore ones are, but especially so since S&S preferentially select the weak and helpless as prey. At least they don't eat kids. 83
Posted by Rulke 14 years ago Report
I like the cruel and dark stories. I've all of Joe Abercrombie's books on my shelf and trust me he's about as dark as you can legally go in published writing.
I like the selectiveness of it, you actually talk about how they choose who to go after and even leave two alone to serve as witnesses to their harmlessness.
It is interesting.
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
This story makes me think of the picture you made earlier:
"Sleepover with Sandra,"
I liked the story, I could easily imagine the scene when I read it.
Posted by Strega 14 years ago Report
Yes indeed, this story is meant to reference that pic. Just change the clothing in the pic a bit and we have Sandra half curled up right before Striper comes in.
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
Well strega since you have complained before about how no one takes the time to properly comment to stories...
OMG, i'm not heavily into furries particularly most anthro work, but this... wow you really can do more then just paint pretty pictures! I should have known the person that puts those lovely little stories with many of his posted artwork could write something longer, but this was a surprise!
I love how you took care of all the details of minimizing getting caught as a pred in a mostly non vore world. That work alone made this an excellent story for me. And the surprise glomping of Del's head just when she least expected it was yummy.
Sadly my grammar skills are limited to 'what sounds right' but even with that I did not have one hang up in the reading of this narrative. Which I am both awed and envious of since you freely admitted to writing this with only your droid! I couldn't even find a misspelled word to gripe about!
And you did lovely work developing Del just enough to make her a mildly sympathetic victim here. Now if only i wasn't more interested in sneaky, trust developing preds <3
For a short piece made while visiting a farm and without the bulk of your electronics this is truly impressive to this often times clunky and struggling writer! I wish you would write more! If you added more stories TO your artwork like what you did here...
Posted by Strega 14 years ago Report
I do have the problem that I don't understand or write emotions well, so my stories tend to be dry and mutually similar to one another. But I do try, and I do enjoy writing. 83
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
I find it is master wordspinners that convey emotions well, the rest of us are just works in progress XD
Posted by maleperduis 14 years ago Report
Wonderful story! Love that you had one of Sandra's victims explicitly not be a scumbag but semi-sympathetic. I'm also a big fan of affection between predators, so that's another button this one pressed for me :)
Would be interesting to see a story about these two that goes more into their mentality before/during/after vore, that's always something I find particularly interesting and enjoyable to read about, though I suppose that is just my own taste
Posted by Strega 14 years ago Report
S&S are picky about prey only in that they want people who won't be missed. Whether the prospective meal is nice or a scumbag is not a consideration.
This one largely took place before the vore. A Tale Told In The Dark covers their after-vore celebrations to some extent.
Posted by maleperduis 14 years ago Report
I realise it's not a consideration for them, but it's a consideration for the reader. And I'll take a look at Tale Told in the Dark too.