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by me! So if you're a fire-born demigod, just how much trouble can you get in trying to help people, anyway?

One rather rash dragon finds out, quite a bit!

This should be my good to go copy, my story folder is rather disorganized and needs cleaning up!

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Stalbon

Posted by Stalbon 13 years ago Report

Very nice indeed! You use some phrases like 'little death' from a couple of fantasy series that I'm very fond of, which makes me wonder if you haven't chanced to read those, too! I don't think you had, since I'm sure we would have talked about them before, but still, very well-written, my friend. :>

Galis

Posted by Galis 13 years ago Report

Thanks red! And I haven't read any fantasy series in a long time so its probably coincidence!

SirScotty

Posted by SirScotty 13 years ago Report

If there wasn't a "Part One" tacked onto the title there, I might have been disappointed by the end of such a promising character! Still, years of browsing stories in galleries like this have left me wary. There *is* a part two, isn't there?

Galis

Posted by Galis 13 years ago Report

Yeah, this ended up so long that the editing was taking forever, so I split it up. Part two's about half done.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 4 years ago Report

What happened to the part two.