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A girl buys an exotic pet. Over time she learns to play with it... eventually forgetting that technically it's a dangerous beast...
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Posted by Jacquelope 13 years ago Report
Woah, man! Hey, long time no see! How's it going?
Posted by temporos 13 years ago Report
Been wondering the same thing. I miss your stories.
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
Still alive. Just that now I have a life, all of a sudden. Wife, real job, first child on the way, you know the drill.
Posted by theheadsn 13 years ago Report
awesome story!
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
Thanks! I can't take complete credit for it, though; I was HEAVILY influenced by this story by LilAbner: http://disturbedthings.com/forum2/12426.html
Posted by BabLe7 13 years ago Report
oooh. genius! i love it. nice little open-ended ending too.
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
I'll say the same as I did above; I just put my own spin on a story someone else wrote. LilAbner's story (link below)had a nice open ending (a little LESS open, maybe, but still), and I felt this one needed that too.
http://disturbedthings.com/forum2/12426.html
Posted by plantdigger 13 years ago Report
Great Idea for a pred! Also I missed your stories too. Welcome Back!
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
I'm still around. Just been a lot less active. The pred was just a way of getting around the time it would take for a small snake to grow large enough to engulf an entire woman.
Posted by WolfFort 13 years ago Report
This is freaking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
Thanks! Again, I can't take full credit for the semi-consensual storyline, though!
http://disturbedthings.com/forum2/12426.html
Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report
Heh. Well, her first clue should have been that the bestiary was wrong about ONE thing...
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
You'd THINK... :P
Posted by Valorie 13 years ago Report
Great story, thanks for writing it!
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by Luffredd 13 years ago Report
nice story :) love the ending
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
Based on the story I read, and the way that one ended, I HAD to leave this story open-ended. :)
Posted by 3phantoms 13 years ago Report
Wow that was a good story
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Definitely damsel in distress and yet, cute. I love this "little" monster you created for this. And the way you developed this over time. Long story yes, but worth it. And you left the fatal or non-fatal up to the individual reader, mmmmm.
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
Yep. I HAD to be an open ending. This way the reader can assume whichever they choose based on their own preferences. :)
Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report
I dunno about "based on their own preferences". I love me a good digestion scene, but it really does feel like the smallilisk is leaning toward letting her out... eventually.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
If there are no accidents. I mean even Darth Vader warned about accidents >_>
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
Damn. Then I failed in my original intent. :/
Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report
Well, I suppose there's still room for ambiguity. She might get let out, think on it, and decide that the next time's for real.
Posted by Nevyen 13 years ago Report
Fantastic Story!
Posted by KavenBach 13 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by Taismo 13 years ago Report
That was a hot story :). And awesome about the wife and child. :)
Posted by dkitty 13 years ago Report
Another great story. I love how you left the way she looks up to the reader and what happens to her next. (I think he should take a log nap and let his meal digest, but that’s just me.) I’m glad there’s no snakes like that or I would end up like her. ;)
I’ve tried and tried to get into disturbedthings.com but still can’t. I wished I could so I could read more of your work like the Ambassadors of Flesh story. Maybe I’ll try again.
I hope to see more of your work soon.
Posted by giblieherps 10 years ago Report
I just saw your most recent upload and then i clicked over here and reread this story, i was great then and great now. I cant wait to see more of your work, you have been missed.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 7 years ago Report
I love indecisive preds like this. It helps to up the tension while allowing a happy ending.
Posted by ijkdenem 3 years ago Report
needs a sequel.
Posted by ijkdenem 3 years ago Report
he needs to fuck her