Posted by quizmaster 13 years ago Report

Been a while since I read something incredible as that....:)

The vore, foreplay, and even how she undressed carried a sense of elegance and grace.
(duh, nobles right?)

Favorite part about it though was the dialog itself. Ex: The instance of her reading the book that gradually began to diminish in appeal.

It had nothing to do with the story but at the same time it did.
It drew you in to Miria's mindset and how she thought of things, as did other little instances throughout the story.

And I'll stop before I make any less sense. lol

The Lady's Favorite is going in my favorites.

Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report

I really fell in love with the setting. You know you've got something worthwhile on your hands when you're only halfway through writing the story and you've already got three or four follow-ons in mind.

Glad you enjoyed it!

Posted by Red_Wolfen 13 years ago Report

Stunning, as always.

Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report

Well, I don't think I've been THAT consistent, but thanks. This one felt like a winner.

Posted by Sehnsucht 13 years ago Report

This story was Leith throughout---gorgeously, luxuriously poetic, and in no hurry but carrying the reader swiftly on. And then there's this paragraph in the middle that is pure Kavas, conflicted and facetious and clever, when Miria reads her far-fetched book. I couldn't help but laugh out loud at that and it felt perfectly right that the author should indulge as much as the main character.

The scene where she swallowed Leith was unbearably sweet and very well-rendered. It's been a long time since I read something that left this same sort of lazy, satisfied warmth. Leith is a very lucky fey. Marvellous work!

Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report

Hm... I can't help but wonder if maybe having one paragraph "Kavas" in a field of "Leith" indicates a problem...

But, still, glad you enjoyed it!

Posted by French_snack 13 years ago Report

Beautiful story; beautiful style. Drawing us deep into her perspective works wonderfully well. A pleasure to read, throughout.

Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report

Happy customers make my day too! Glad you enjoyed it.

Posted by caramelapple7050 10 years ago Report

I don't remember liking anything here *this* much before.
I loved the slow, langourous pace and the wealth of description- but there was something a whole lot more to it that I can't quite articulate.

Incredible stuff. :')