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Just a short one, this time. Remember Josh and Patricia (story 67)? This is a brief look at a relationship between predator and prey, girlfriend and boyfriend.
Contains fairly mild sexual references.
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Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
Daaaaaamn, that is an all new twist to my usual love of domme/sub (I am typically F/F, but..) and this is... mmmmm...
Usually I dislike males as prey, but this piece... the context you put it within... I like this story. And it was short enough to read all at once, not over several hours (like some of yours are, lol).
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Heh. Well, it was a short idea, so there was no point dragging it out more than this. I'm glad you like it! It's a form of vore submission that I'd never really looked into, and it just struck me and appealed to me.
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
Form of vore submission? Do you mean the type of story or the type of vore within the story? (sorry, I can see both options and am curious about one of them)
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
I mean simply that Josh is quite submissive to Patricia here, and she's trying to make him even more so in a way... which he has mixed feelings about.
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
Mmmm, yes I enjoy assertive preds. Of course I'm a natural pred, so I view things from their viewpoint >_>
Nice experiment. I hope you do more in this style as the mood strikes you ^^
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
I love the little give and take of the power game you established at the end. :)
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thank you! The two of them are working out a relationship of a fairly unusual sort. :p
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
Yes, I second this.
Posted by Justin Bailey 11 years ago Report
I can easily imagine me and my girlfriend in this sort of situation if she was actually capable of shrinking and eating me.
Also, signing the waiver is a metaphor for getting married. *slams my hand down and points in the style of Phoenix Wright*
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Hehe. Signing the waiver is certainly just as much a commitment as getting married!
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thanks very much!
Posted by bedfordsb 11 years ago Report
Yes, I had missed this earlier - looking forward to hearing how this works out!
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Luckless 11 years ago Report
I'm an instant fan of Patricia. This story arc is marvelous! Will it be continued some day? :O
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing the dynamics of Patricia and Josh's relationship (after Josh's first appearance in story 67). We'll certainly see the two of them again.