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Angelissa and Im'Rhys are "friends with benefits", but when Angelissa makes a special request for a "girls night out" before she has to return to Heaven, Im'Rhys decides to give her something special.
This is chapter one of a novella.
This was inspired by a casual RP with Angel back in December.
This is pending feedback from the writing group as to things I could improve upon.
Angelissa belongs to Angel
Im'Rhys is my OC.
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Posted by Angel 12 years ago Report
Mm... <3 Very well done, I love it. Much more complex than the stories I usually write, but it's still a pretty smooth read. And you captured Angelissa's character quite well. And Im'Rhys is such a seductress...
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Thank you <333
Posted by Firstfate 12 years ago Report
Love it! :) I hope there will be a part two >.<
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Part two is already started, but might be more liked by my female audience for it deals with the pregnancy stages before we get onto the funner stuff in later chapters.
Posted by Firstfate 12 years ago Report
You probably haven't read any of my stories then and I may not have written any of it down, but my own characters have impregnation periods too, although I won't have the detail you do lol
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
You do what you are good at, don't worry about everyone else. Writing like I do takes up a lot of extra time. These things, as of now, take me about two weeks to fully write and post. That is brutally slow for only 6800 word short story.
Posted by Firstfate 12 years ago Report
Ouch..yeah, most of my stories take me a few hours to write up, but that is only when I the fire of inspiration spurring me along. Without that fire......I just don't type :/
Posted by AndromedaReject 12 years ago Report
You finished it?! <3 Very well done!
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Thank you, your clawedness ^^
Posted by icekirbeh 12 years ago Report
Woah..
I dont usually read on this website, but your stories are great! Reallt gave me a picture of what was happening
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Thank you. You just told me exactly what I wanted to hear, that you could picture it all ^^
Some side info: look at my "watches" and go read the stuff of Sansuki, Bitter, AndrewLondon, Kevinbach, and 4ofswords. You like my stuff, those five will blow your doors off.
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Thank you.
Posted by HitomiBoy 12 years ago Report
Mmm. A good read indeed >:3
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Thank you ^^
Posted by Iaea 12 years ago Report
Very yummy <3
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Hehehehe, there you are. Thank you ^^
Posted by thefatalenglishman 12 years ago Report
Not my usual kind of thing, but I really enjoyed it, so vivid and descriptive. Nice one : )
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Any time someone starts off with "not my usual kind of thing" and ends with a compliment, mmmmmmm, they are beautiful things. Thank you.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Wow! I should have watched you long ago. this is really, really well written. somehow you managed to make this story both mysterious, erotic, and also very sweet. I love it!
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Thank you ^^ I really need to get back to this story. Just lost a lot of motivation after it got critiqued, because I began to feel the weight of the expectations I had laid out in here. But I loved writing this. And some the follow-up chapters are... mmmm <3
Posted by vore2412 9 years ago Report
Very nice chapter one, if you do a chapter two will be nice to see as well. See how Angelissa turns out
Posted by Imrhys 9 years ago Report
Thank you. Actually I should add this to my WIP list, because the events in this do affect events in the larger "novelization" story between the two of them.
And I'll say this for the projected end of this series of chapters. It all ends at dawn, with a kiss, and an "I love you." But since vore is not the primary theme of the story... Lost a lot of incentive to work on it for posting here >_>
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
I'm not sure how I missed this one when you originally posted it, but very nice! I'm glad I caught your mention of it on the forums recently.
Posted by Imrhys 9 years ago Report
Well one, atypical UB, so... Filter strength, etc.? lol And thank you ^^