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Tags: addiction Alien alien pred Aria T'loak Asari Belch Belly Big Breasts big hips Burp Digestion F/F Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Flush Flushing Human Human Prey Hungry Prey Mass Effect Multiple Preys noise Off-screen vore Older Pred Oral Vore Quarian reluctant prey Same Size Scat Sexy Poses Sha'ira Shala'Raan Smother Soft Vore Swallowing Tali'Zorah Toilet Unwilling Prey
Mass effect vore story.
F/f
Tali'Zorah/KhalisahEmilySha'iraTevos.
Shala'Raan/Aria
More of an intermission of sorts, showing her trip back to the fleet. And during it, it shows that Tali is becoming addicted to the sensation of devouring other sentient beings.
Doesn't bode well for the Normandy when she eventually gets back.
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Posted by Blahblahbum 12 years ago Report
My jaw is on the floor.
Posted by Kiala_Tiagra 12 years ago Report
omg finally new ME vore from you. it has been my favourite since the garrus/tali one
too bad no krogan......yet...that story by shala'raan made me curious... oh well
i hope one day ya open for commission
Posted by Kiala_Tiagra 12 years ago Report
ok something weird what is this number doing in the middle of your story text? "5474757574"
Posted by Vir 12 years ago Report
Just a hurried division line I overlooked when I went over it the second and third time before posting the story. Fixed now.
Thanks.
Posted by Kiala_Tiagra 12 years ago Report
ahhh ok glad to help
Posted by acetheonly 12 years ago Report
Great story once again
What is the number about?
Posted by Vir 12 years ago Report
A hurried division line I overlooked during the correction phase. Fixed now.
Thanks you.
Posted by Blahblahbum 12 years ago Report
This is indeed an amazing piece, next time I would go into more depth of the digestion process, describe the prey's body being incorporated and assimilated into the predator's body. Muscles being reinforced, bones becoming tougher, sing more durable as the prey's body is absorbed into the predator's, further enhancing strength, speed and stamina. Also perhaps Tali would start to develop formidable biotic powers which she could use to snare further meals thanks to her diet of extremely old and powerful Asari Matriarchs. Awesome job!
Posted by Vir 12 years ago Report
With so many meals, it would have never gotten finished if I added too many details.
That's how I roll. Some detail when many prey. More detailed when there's few prey.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
O_O Mind = blown. amazing vore sequence.
Posted by Vir 12 years ago Report
Thank you. :)
Posted by swerto 12 years ago Report
new chapter. amazing.
Posted by Ray 12 years ago Report
I love it. I only wish Shala would have teased Aria a bit longer, really build up the fear. Maybe some bits that are from Aria's perspective too once she's in the belly. Draw it out longer maybe.
Posted by SuperheroFood 7 years ago Report
This is my favourite chapter of this awesome series. Just outstanding work. Especially loved the saga of Shala'Raanvs Aria. I just wish there had been more taunting before the swallowing of Aria. Everything else was perfection.
Posted by Matanuiv 3 years ago Report
Constantly keep coming back to re-read this series. Keep seeing this particular chapter as some odd multiversal karma as a result of another Tali/Aria centered ME story you have,,,