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Rose was just your average high school student until a sudden hunger hit her. This is the story of her first prey.
Also, this is my very first vore story :) So if you could please leave con-crit if you have any, I would really appreciate it. Thanks!
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Posted by MysteryOne 12 years ago Report
Hmm, not bad. Also, funny those voices. :)
There's a little description abut Nick's appearance though.
Posted by Bright 12 years ago Report
I like the first person view of telling the story. Very nicely written I`d say.
Posted by VoraciousRose 12 years ago Report
Thank you :)