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Ruby is half Mithra, half succubus, and all sexy. Sexy enough that even Coriri takes note of her partner in revenge now and then.
It's dangerous to get too close to Ruby, though. Those succubus powers seem to mostly be good for getting their cheating targets into her belly, which punishes them for their infidelity.
But Coriri's confident she won't end up like that. Confident enough to bet her own life against Ruby's hungry tummy. After all, she's a powerful mage. Getting out of a half-demoness's stomach should be a snap, right?
Posted by DenethorN 11 years ago Report
Excellent. Coriri's was so prideful and then she surrendered only to panic one last time...nice.
Also loved the double ending and enjoyed both black and white version.
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Posted by DeliciousReya 11 years ago Report
I was so torn between the two endings, it just seemed wrong to pick just one :D It seems Coriri was, too.
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Posted by Jesseman1 11 years ago Report
I get the feeling that both endings still have the same outcome: fatal. So should there be a fatal tag?
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Posted by PandaESL 11 years ago Report
This is a new favorite story of mine now, lol. A ton of this really clicks with me.
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Posted by DeliciousReya 11 years ago Report
Glad to hear you liked it! :D
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Posted by FutureBellyAche 10 years ago Report
I really like this story, but I always lose it.
Good work!
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Posted by FutureBellyAche 10 years ago Report
I really like this story, but I always lose it.
Good work!
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Posted by Ixtili 9 years ago Report
I think it's my headcanon that both endings occured at the same time.
I know that doesn't make sense but shush it's headcanon. :P
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Posted by Nyummins 3 years ago Report
Thiiis story. Issa good story. I loved this back in the day, and I love it now.
I'd say it's what got me into writing in the first place, back when I found it a million years ago. (Not that those stories will ever see the light of day)
I wasn't a fan of digestion at the time, but boy did this kick those doors wide open.
So hey, thanks for great stories.
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Posted by Nyummins 3 years ago Report
Woah what's with the all the space down there.
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Posted by DeliciousReya 3 years ago Report
You should know how much this comment made my day :'D I'm glad I inspired you! From a quick look, it looks like you're doing amazing stuff over there - I'll have to read more of your stuff! Good luck out there!!
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Posted by Nyummins 3 years ago Report
That is such a huge compliment, thank you! I'm glad to have made your day with my silly gushing.
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