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Story 104 - Appointment eternal By French_snack -- Report

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This one is a bit... Well, you'll see when you read it. (It's very short. I'm not saying anything else.)

Those of you who liked this might also like this later story of mine ("The loop"): http://aryion.com/g4/view/291213 .

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Bright

Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report

Very interesting story. I like your take on Time travel.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Thank you! A little bit different to what I usually write.

Bright

Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report

If she creates a new time line every time she eats someone, could she theoretically be eating the protagonist every time?

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

I like the way you think. :) Yes, in principle, because there would always be a timeline in which he isn't eaten, and in which therefore he doesn't know it.

Of course, for her to eat him *several* times, that would imply she has the ability to cross timelines. To move from a timeline in which he's been eaten, to one in which he hasn't yet.

Bright

Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report

You did imply that she was from a time much further into the future, so I suppose something there is different.