Posted by bedfordsb 11 years ago Report

What I particularly liked about this was the small touches - waitresses like Cassie feeling that they needed to almost put on an Aussie accent. And working in one of those awful reality shows but based around vore - fascinating. Mona's still in Sydney by the way, trying to start up the new Australian venture!

Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report

Thanks! It occurred to me that reality TV would inevitably seize upon vore at some point and stage it as something distastefully voyeuristic. Abena does not approve!

Good luck to Mona! I look forward to seeing again what she's up to, at some point.

Posted by Plasmids 11 years ago Report

This was a very interesting story. I really liked how Abena really cared for her regular Jock and how she would not want to go all the way with the true vore. I never usually see stories like that, don't get me wrong I love the vore... but sometimes your instinct to be human outweighs any desire, fantasy or fetish that one has.

The reality TV was a good idea as well. The one thing that I will say, if you don't mind me saying so, was that the one girl who was not interested in vore and still did it kinda of bothered me in a way. If was as if she was like a trained actress that nobody knew about in the media and she was just doing this for the vacation and to get her career started or something. Cause if see was really a hater of vore and knew she wouldn't devore a guy, then she wouldn't be there in the first place.

But I guess for reality TV, it adds some suspense to the the show and increases ratings, maybe. And it was also nice to see the differences between Abena and Kim. Kim still went along and ate the man for her vacation trip, whereas Abena was not willing to part with her "lover to be" for anything. Just goes to show you that the heart wants what the stomach can not, lol.

Overall, great job as usually! This one was a really good story and I really enjoyed. Can't wait to see what you will write next!

Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report

Thank you! Yes, there was a deliberate parallel between the characters' choices. Plus, as you say, it's quite rare to see a character say "I can't actually eat you, sorry"!

You're quite right about the "reluctant" girl. Which is why Abena suspected that her entire behaviour may have been arranged with the producers - a set-up, to generate viewer interest. Impossible to prove, but odd enough to be suspicious.

Posted by huitcinquante 11 years ago Report

Very nice story, as usual ! I've been writing a reality TV show based story, one day, and your way to treat it somehow remember it ...
The parallel between Abby and Kim was very interesting. I wonder what would happen between Abby and Jock... This would deserve a sequel, don't you know ? But would it be a vore story or a love story ?
Thanks again

Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report

Merci ! Ca a l'air d'être parti plutôt pour une histoire d'amour entre Abby et Jock, mais il peut toujours y avoir du vore aussi dans leur relation !

Posted by Vixen20 11 years ago Report

That was... That was REALLY sweet <3

Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report

Thank you! :)

Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report

I really like the concept of the ‘Eat Him’ reality show - very novel idea there. Also enjoyed the side story between Abela and Jock. Very well done FS.

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Abena may have rolled her eyes at the whole idea of the show, but she was probably keeping up to date on it all the same. ;)