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The European qualifiers to the International Vore Competition. (Africa: Story 73. Asia: Story 89.)
Will Cherry make a successful come-back onto the vore scene? Also featuring Abena, Oksana and Sahiba - but there aren't enough places for all of them!
Oksana, Sahiba, Kim and Mona belong to bedfordsb, as does the Vore Restaurant. Credit to you also for the specific difficulty Oksana faces here.
No toilet scenes in this one. (Sorry to any who may be disappointed! ;)) Some explicit references to sexual arousal.
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Posted by bedfordsb 11 years ago Report
Really exceptional writing here. You have captured Oksana's rather odd world view exactly; I found myself laughing out loud at her annoyance with the decadent Western capitalists, so it will be interesting to see whether there is a disqualification issue.
I am not far off finishing an Australian story - it needs a few minor tweaks now that I've read this. Suffice to say there is a twist at the end of the tale!
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Now you've got me very curious - and impatient! ;)
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad I've got Oksana right. She was fun to write about!
Posted by 00000 11 years ago Report
I love both of your takes on these stories! Excellent story from you, as usual, F_s! Good work. My particular favorite parts are always the after-competition shennanigans. I think it's awesome when I see the IVC in my updates! I'll be looking out for your next work bedfordsb! Thanks to BOTH of you guys for putting out polished works with decent grammar and character development.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
I'm very glad you're enjoying them! Thanks for the comment.
Posted by huitcinquante 11 years ago Report
I can't say better than 00000... It was another excellent IVC story. I wish it could never finish !
I'm a little desapointed that Cherry couldn't have sex with her husband with her bloated belly, but it's quite more realistic like that, through ;-)
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Merci ! Il y en aura d'autres ; après les qualifications, ce sera la grande finale !
Cherry... a très certainement fait l'amour avec son mari dès qu'elle a pu digérer un peu. ;)