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Third part of my trade with dracodarastrix. enjoy =)
next chapter tomorrow
as usual, don't hesitate to leave a comment
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Posted by Pendrin 11 years ago Report
There is a small repeated section in the story i don't know if you can edit it once it is submitted or not. it is about 3/4 of the way through the story where Rakan is standing up to his "master"
Posted by learner 11 years ago Report
most sincere apologies about that... sometimes, when I correct texts, I make copies of parts so I can compare... probably did a bad ctrl + V^^
The problem is fixed=)
Posted by Chrysaor 11 years ago Report
The man said "I’m going to teach you!”, yes you taught him breathing fire, well done XD!
Oh, and can Mr Devon join the feast XD?
Oh come one, I'm fed up to repeat myself, you know how my comment would be each time XD!
Posted by learner 11 years ago Report
Devon will have his own punishment ^^
so you know what my reply will be XD
Posted by Chrysaor 11 years ago Report
Oh I'm sure that he will a deserved punishment :)!
Sayke: "But it takes his time to come (>u>)... "
Shhhh ><... Sorry, don't pay attention to him... Do you have another cookie >=3?
Sayke: "No, please, not the cookie, I'm begging you, everything but that!!!"
Posted by learner 11 years ago Report
*cookie pops up* HERE YOU GOOOOOOOOOO^^