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Just at the moment of Autumn's triumph, when she has finally shown off her hobby and Dinah is actually -interested-, things go badly. What's the first rule of Munchkin Club? (It's not what you think.)
F/(mf) soft vore, but the hard vore in these chapters is more frequent, even if it's not really described. It's quite fatal for the munchkins.
Part 3 of 5. Updated 2015-08-10.
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Posted by Littledude 11 years ago Report
This story is a lot like The Clone by Ladyprey on giantessworld.net, have you read that? Also, Lincoln's reaction of loyalty and love even after learning he was food was an unexpected but intriguing twist.
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
I haven't! But I'll bookmark it for later. :)
Posted by Sehnsucht 11 years ago Report
This is wonderful ;_; A fresh perspective!
Old-fashioned settings suit your characters' introspection.
Autumn's ambiguous answer, "No," was glorious.
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
<grin>
And thank you!
Posted by Marked 11 years ago Report
I loved the use food in this. Very nice selections to complement these munchkins rather than overwelm them; I could imagine every taste. The story is also getting real interesting now that we have some real face to face time with Lincoln.
I'd just like to point out that I really, really dig this kind of pred/prey interaction. Sure, you could treat munchkins like a product, with all this extra hobby going to refine them. But in my mind, it's not the lack of dose or "free-range" rearing that sets them apart, it's taking the time to get personal with them. If it were me in Autumn's shoes, I'd be thrilled to have the chance to eat someone I'd raised from scratch.
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
<grin> Autumn feels the same way too, but for different reasons, I reckon. ;)
I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
Posted by Ka-Atis 11 years ago Report
Ha ha, the longer she waits, the more difficult it gets.. ;)
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
I know! Why doesn't she realize that?
Posted by Ka-Atis 11 years ago Report
I think she does.. but... but.. ;)
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
<grin> Indeed.