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A Squishy Boy: Jack's First Halloween By Derpus -- Report

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Tags: Boy Endosoma Flattening implied full tour Implied Vore M/M Male Pred Male Prey Non-fatal shota prey squishy teenage pred Unwilling Prey

Originally posted on Writing.com.
It took me a while to figure out how to upload submissions. Look, it was Halloween when I finished it, okay!

Anyway, this is my first single page story involving my character, Jack Harper (I'll upload a bio shortly) finally getting to go trick-or-treating, only for it to end in disaster. I originally had another idea entirely, but the Halloween theme was lost and I had to start from scratch.

Constructive criticism is always welcome.

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Posted by shades 11 years ago Report

very well done. I like the premise and enjoyed the way Ash interacted with Jack

Posted by Derpus 11 years ago Report

Thanks.

Posted by vaatidorf6000 11 years ago Report

Very well done. I don't usually like m/m vore, but I like this story.

Posted by Derpus 11 years ago Report

I'm happy to hear that.