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1995
The first story I ever wrote. An early bawdy retelling of the old fairy tale.
I was very young when I first wrote this and sent it into BG, so these days I don't consider it very good. But some people have liked it over the years, and it seemed like I should include it when putting up my stories on Eka's.
Primarily soft, sensual M/F vore, there's a little bit of M/M hard vore in there.
Posted by New 11 years ago Report
You know, I almost wish that Gram was Red's husband rather than boyfriend, just so she could have that last name to match her personality.
That aside, while it's pretty easy to tell that this is an early story when comparing it to the quality of your others, it is still exceptionally good; I've never seen anyone else pull off a remake of LRRR at all. It only serves to demonstrate that you've been a talented author for all of your life.
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Posted by Ixtili 9 years ago Report
Well given in the original the wolf fed grandma to Red and then told her to take her clothes off so he could "devour" her. This retelling is actually closer to the original than you'd think.
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Posted by the_Wolf 8 years ago Report
Huh, I'd never read that particular version, though I'd seen a few others. But with so many of these being originally oral traditions, there are bound to be lots of variants. Granted, I had no idea about a lot of this stuff way back when I wrote it. Thanks for the bit of info. :)
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Posted by JacktheGreen 7 years ago Report
For a first effort it's not a bad thing, the emphasis on sex really sells and the characterization is rather strong
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Posted by JacktheGreen 7 years ago Report
For a first effort it's not a bad thing, the emphasis on sex really sells and the characterization is rather strong
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