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2013
Commissioned by max123
Recently, Michael has discovered that most of the women in his family share a secret desire to be prey. And in a world where hungry predators will pay to gobble down willing humans, he's hoping that he can score the best deal for one daughter's future… as long as he can tantalize the right predator.
Posted by Drakira 11 years ago Report
I have to say this is a great story. I love the use of food and how giddy and willing the prey are.
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Posted by the_Wolf 11 years ago Report
Glad you liked those elements, was fun writing them out for the commissioner. Plan to play with that in some other stories in the future. Thanks for the compliment!
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Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report
It baffles me how stories have less favourites than pictures and comics.
This piece is a clear example of how a story can outmatch any pictures thrown at it. Despite it bring three years old, it hasn't lost any of it's shine.
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Posted by the_Wolf 8 years ago Report
Well, all I can say is that I'm thankful at least some people are still enjoying these works. I admit, I do wish stories got more cred, but there are so many factors into why this seems to be the split. Still, nice to have a supporter of writing still watching and complimenting. Always appreciate the love, Bookie.
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Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report
You're welcome. uωu
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Posted by venomousdreams 7 years ago Report
I feel like the wife, daughters and sisters are all very selfish. Especially the wife, giving up the her life so that she can get a cheap thrill and not have to stick around for her husband. She doesn't even take his feelings on the matter into account, but to be fair, the husband is a very weak character as well. He could put his foot down and say that the predator could eat his daughters and sisters, but not his wife and I feel like the way you portrayed the wife she would have listened and put aside her selfishness to spend time with the man she married and obviously loves.
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Posted by venomousdreams 7 years ago Report
I would appreciate your permission to write an AU to this. A version where the wife is a bit less selfish and the husband has a backbone. (I am in truth not asking for the permission to write it as it has already been written but to publish it on this site.)
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Posted by the_Wolf 7 years ago Report
I'm going to have to say permission denied. The characters here are supposed to be the way they are, personal flaws and failings and all. Also, this was a commission for someone and it's exactly the way they wanted it.
I'm prickly about anyone changing works I put hours into for some personal thing. Can always have similar themes in a completely original work with characters you create.
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Posted by venomousdreams 7 years ago Report
And that is why I always ask first. Thank you for the prompt reply and rest assured that the story will not see the light of day.
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Posted by the_Wolf 7 years ago Report
Thank you for being respectful on this, it means a lot to see people can be.
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Posted by venomousdreams 7 years ago Report
No problem!
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