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If you are a regular reader of my stories, I would recommend you do *not* look at the tags, but simply begin reading. The tags contain spoilers.
I'll say simply that this is a little different, by at least one key aspect, to what I usually do. I would not initially have written a story with this type of predator mindset. I'm indebted to writers such as oishi1 and girlfood for having awakened my interest in non-consensual vore in an "ordinary" (non-fantasy) setting. (Girlfood's character Lindsay may be a total bitch, but what she does is undeniably appealing! Long may she continue to be so callous. Oishi1's character Lucy in "the Shell Game" also comes to mind.) Similarly, I was clearly inspired by nostromo's highly memorable story "Soft Landing". And I can't mention callous predation without mentioning ScS's comic "That Girl Next Door". To all of you, thanks; I probably wouldn't have written this without you!
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Posted by friemeltje1 11 years ago Report
well, that was definitely unlike anything I've ever read :)
Not really my style, as a same-size lover, but definitely an enjoying read. The initial seduction was nice, though.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thanks. I don't do much same-size, unfortunately - though I do see the appeal.
Posted by 00000 11 years ago Report
Dude! Always love seeing your human stories! Good work as usual. You capture very well a power dynamic between pred and prey. I like your experimentation here with a third-party pred. I'd enjoy seeing some more of this in the future... maybe with some Cherry-esque "romance scenes"?!
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thank you. There's something strangely appealing about an unsuspecting "pred", who doesn't realise what she's eating, and never finds out.
I don't think I'll ever bring transformation vore into Cherry's "universe", but if this story / Emily's style of vore is sufficiently popular, I may do a "Christmas special" or something in which Emily arranges for several people to be transformed and eaten by her friends. (And maybe even some romance for her, this time? I'll have to think about it...)
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
Fun story! Here are some of my thoughts about it:
-What are the practical difficulties with the banana?
-" Perhaps one day, if I find true love, I’ll have someone to share my little secret…" I know that feeling :)
-I was very excited to read a more "bittersweet" story from you. I like this sort of thing best :)
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thanks. I don't often write such stories, but they occasionally do appeal to me. :) Regarding the banana, the difficulty is getting someone to eat it, without the offer seeming odd. It's doable, but not as easy as getting them to eat a nut.
Posted by girlfood 11 years ago Report
Thanks for the shout out! I continue to be inspired by you.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thank you! And you're welcome. :)
Posted by oishi1 11 years ago Report
I needed that. Great story. You give the reader enough time to get to know the characters, but you still manage to build suspense. I read the tags before I saw who the author was and had to do a double take. You are getting more adventurous. Thanks for the shout out by the way. I enjoyed the story and wouldn't mind more with the particular characters. Perhaps when "our hero" discovers a way to logistically give her crush a banana.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thank you! I very much enjoyed writing it, so it was worth experimenting a little. Thanks for the inspiration!
I'd certainly like to write about Emily again at some point. I'm thinking vaguely of her organising a bit of a feast for friends of hers. Getting a few tummies nicely filled up. ;) It would be a "semi-interactive": I'd ask my readers whether they'd like to be included in the story as transformees, and if so what they'd like to be turned into.
Posted by oishi1 11 years ago Report
that sounds fun. It would take a lot of work though. I'm all for it.
Posted by miniboy 10 years ago Report
is emily a lesbian?
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Yes.
Posted by miniboy 10 years ago Report
i want to meet her,hehe
Posted by miniboy 10 years ago Report
hope i can read more about her stories,maybe she can transform me,haha