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In which a wolfwere is tortured. I cut out the more graphic parts of the scene because I had succeeded in disturbing myself, but torture still occurs even if it's mostly off-camera so to speak.
This bit is almost as long as the other two parts put together, and I only cut it here because I started to become length-conscious. This wasn't my ideal ending point, but I couldn't just keep going on and on, could I?
Mild spoilers below:
The scene changes to the Imperial City, which I expect will be the setting for quite a bit longer, Branwen isn't heard from at all (poor old lady, just suppose Uriel's interrogating her off-screen or something), several new but mostly minor characters join the cast, and Uriel proves to be more of a psycopath than I originally surmised. There's more failed vore, but there's also some more successful vore, albeit not particularly detailed. I think that's everything of consequence.
I don't think I've mentioned this, but when I write I don't plan things out very far in advance, so if there's anything that anyone thinks would be interesting and plausible for me to write in, give it mouth.
Enjoy. That's a command.
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Posted by Assassinmaster62 11 years ago Report
I liked the way this turned out. Agreed on the failed vore scenes, but hey, what can ya do right?
The setting of the Imperial City and the way things went down reminded me a lot of Skyrim, but I've been playing that game recently, so that has to do with a lot of it.
Over all, your story is headed in the right direction, and it shys away from the traditional stereotypes of most stories like this, which is a plus.
Only one question, but how far do you plan on going with it? Like, is there a planned ending, or will the ending create itself?
Posted by I_Cant_Write 11 years ago Report
As always, thanks for commenting.
I'm not an Elder Scrolls expert, but I'm pretty sure the Cyrodiil Imperial City is somewhat based on Rome. My own Imperial City is itself vaguely styled off Rome, so I'm not surprised you might see some similarities.
As to ending, I've come up with a couple of ideas for how it might end, but because of the way I write I'd rather not try to twist the plot. The ending is planned in the sense that if one of the ones I've been considering fits with plot developments than I'll probably use it, but it's not planned in that it is contingent upon the unplanned plot developments. A simpler and conciser answer would be that it will create itself, as ultimately the ending will be determined by the story progression rather than vice-versa; I'm not working this story towards a given end.
I hope you enjoy future developments (when they eventually do occur). Cheers!