Posted by USful 11 years ago Report

Sweet little back story, a childhood friendship always makes the vore even more personal --and in this manner, it makes the experience more intimate :D Good job!

Posted by yamadayaikki1 11 years ago Report

i wish i had a relation like that actually i wish i had a relationship at all right now

Posted by Liz 11 years ago Report

Is good to see her stand up for herself.
Interesting back story indeed and bully would have got a shock.

Posted by RisingMoon336 11 years ago Report

How was she not charged with murder?
Or sent to a lab to be dissected?
There were lots of witnesses and I'm sure there was lots of evidence

Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report

she was a child ... but surley she get permanently banned from all schools she didnt even get a normal edjucation ... and she hade problem with fonding a job also ... thats why she lives with peter and helps him with his job ... think about it

Posted by RisingMoon336 11 years ago Report

I get the schools and jobs, but surely she had to have been sent to an institute. No way they would ever just let someone who does that just walk away free.

Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report

to an institute ? to eat more children ?

Posted by RisingMoon336 11 years ago Report

And walking around town unwatched is a better option?
Holy hell, it's already bad enough that no one helped the kid she ate!!!

Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report

she lives in a vilige ... and viliges are not big ... people know each other there ... i dont think she can walk unnoticably on the streets from this ... and oh my god its a vore world ... if any of vore characters were living in this world people would shoot them ... dont hawe to take evrithing soo realisticly ... comon !

Posted by RisingMoon336 11 years ago Report

Okay, I'm sorry!!!!! DX
I'm not trying to cause you an aneurysm. It's just a little confusing.
I don't know, I guess my real issue with Zuzana ( I hope I got her name right) is that I'm having trouble feeling sympathetic for her when she killed a kid for being called fat. I see the tragedy of her past and I know kids can be dicks sometimes but condemning a child to a slow and painful fate for calling names is not a way to get me to say "that poor girl is just misunderstood and needs a hug"
Other than the conflicting actions vs wanting to be accepted I like the characters and it has a good narrative. Emotion and characterization is portrayed well despite Zuzana (again, I hope that's correct) being kind of hypocritical. I think my favorite character is Peter for giving her a chance when no one else would. You know, besides kind of just letting that one kid die. But I guess baby steps.

Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report

yep you get her name right ... zuzka or zuzana

well the thing with zuzana is: as the comic says in the first sections she was bullied disliked and ignored since she entered the infants school ... the comic shows her end days at the school so the main conflict ... we r talking about a long time buliing here and that kid trigured zuzanas main defence ("to eat him" as i told about her at her info bar)... so from the begining she tolerated how other people treated her ... but i must say "yes" for your feelings about her and about peter because he was the person who accepted her even after eating that kid "killing him"
... but even she killed sombody ... that wasnt her fault i say

Posted by RisingMoon336 11 years ago Report

I can sympathize with her to a point. I got my ass kicked and bullied my entire school life. I have a small group of friends that I met in high school (5). And I know the kind of pain that causes. I even lashed out once and wound up in an anger management class for 4 years. That being said, I cannot abide by someone who wants to be accepted and yet feels so little contempt for her own actions and the lives of others. What really agitates me, is that instead of this being a catalyst for Zuzana. A mistake that haunts her and makes her strive to do better in order to make others see her as they would want to be seen, she doesn't. Bad people or not, she never stopped, never considered what she was truly doing, and in the end her actions have actually made her the monster that she was unfairly chastised as. We can debate her being a product of an unfair and cruel world. How the abuse of others gave her the gun and screamed at her to use it, but the fact is no matter how you look at it. Zuzana is the one who pulled the trigger and then kept pulling the trigger instead of trying to do better. She can lie to herself all she wants, but The realm of Vore is uncompromising and as cruel as it gets. And her relationship with Peter is only going to end in pain for both of them because she knows what she is doing and quite tragically doesn't seem to care. And just like Vampires, in the world of Vore. The hunger will inevitably consume her in one way or another. I give Peter all the luck in the world. He'll need it.

Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report

okay lets put this kid away and lets talk about peter a littlebit ... what if he wnats to be digested ??? zuzana will do that only if he wants ... you will see in the storry how she cares about him ... now back to that kid ... truly she become a monster wilingly ? her anger caused a realy fast digestion ... i think if she wnated to deside to let that kid go giving him a leason with this she would do it but she didnt get a chance because of that anger ... and evrybody has his dark side no matter who it is ... for example my character veronika is showing just her dark side but in the storry she will revil her other side also as a lover ... you just realy need to see the whole storry

Posted by RisingMoon336 11 years ago Report

I understand that the world isn't so black and white, and as far as willing prey goes, other than the extreme lack of survival instict irking me I say go right ahead if that's what they want. The problem is, From what I've seen. Zuzana's only friend in this world seems to be Peter. She's been alienated by everyone else and most tend to outright fear her (referring to the boy who doesn't trust her, and one that I personally applaud for his incredible level of self preservation unlike his friends. Even if they weren't in danger) what concerns me about thier relationship and its inevitable end is Peter is all she has. Again, she isn't considering the full consequences of this matter. Peter supports her. She lives in his house. He is the shoulder she cries on. He is the one and only who made her feel normal. Peter is the only thing anchoring her to the rest of us as her only piece of humanity left. All I'm saying is, they seem to be abandoning everything that was so great about their life together just for this one fantasy. It poetically tragic

Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report

who sayad zuzana dont hawe other frinds ... you realy need to see the whole storry (i didnt even started)... i will try to make it as fast as i can

Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report

the thruth is i could talk about this until the world ends ... but i realy dont want to reweel the storry so i leave it for the comix to do so

Posted by RisingMoon336 11 years ago Report

Fair enough, I'll shut my trap for now

Posted by Lindinle 11 years ago Report

Fat? She looks rather reasonable. Not chunky, not tubby not even plushy. More like a light fluff

Posted by Soulary 11 years ago Report

But she lets him live/out right? I mean she obviously wouldn't do that to him D:

Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report

she dose ... "to bad people"

Posted by Rebirth 11 years ago Report

Cool i was waiting to see more of this.

Posted by coldsteelj 11 years ago Report

She is so cute. I am waiting for next page ^^

Posted by oddhis 11 years ago Report

I really like how this comic is turning out :D

Posted by Furanz 11 years ago Report

Awwwwhhhhh~! I'm loving this series more and more! Great work as usual ;D

Posted by Ome 11 years ago Report

Awwww. Poor thing. Atleast it had a happy ending.

Posted by Bright 11 years ago Report

Really good job on the face expressions here. I like how you drew her tears.

Posted by banzai 11 years ago Report

Fun to read some backstory !

Posted by ButtPlug 11 years ago Report

Zuzana has the cutest blush.
I wish I could just....
HMMMNNNNHHH~

Posted by fatbelly 11 years ago Report

I do like this story. I hope she lets him out though. It would be nice to see the two of them in a growing relationship. But if it goes another route I hope ZuZka looks back on the day she ate her best friend fondly and maybe shed a tear of happiness that she was able to make his dream come true.

Posted by BIGBIG 11 years ago Report

i cant say anithing for now ... but he is safe C:

Posted by fatbelly 11 years ago Report

Sounds like this story has a lot more in store. Awesome!! I can't wait to read another panel. Oh, by the way, great work.

Posted by Burnide 11 years ago Report

This comic is AMAZING

Posted by Dest 10 years ago Report

Is... is digestion going to happen then?

Posted by Seelane 10 years ago Report

Do the next one plz.