Posted by jackson22222 10 years ago Report

Fascinating... I'm curious as to what exactly got him to start his creative writing, and how his attitude might change or intensify if she actually improves. I have I few ideas as to what might happen, but I will keep those to myself, and await for you to answer those in time.
In short another good chapter; I look forward to the next!

Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report

Thank you for the feedback once again! It's really kind of you. :)

To be honest, there's still a lot of plot details I need to work on as I go, since I've been letting the inspiration purely guide this aside from a few notes about each chapter I jot down before I start them. But I wanted to approach vore in this setting in a much different way than might be expected for a typical vore story. It allows me to build a lot of interactions, character development/introspection, and though the readers themselves know who the predator is, he himself hasn't accepted that such a notion exists. :) The spiral downward into that awakening will be half the fun, in my opinion.

Posted by jackson22222 10 years ago Report

Down like a water slide for us, and a water fall for him, the way almost any psychological downfall should go :)!

Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report

Hahahahaha, that's a great analogy. XD A++

Posted by coop500 10 years ago Report

Ohhh this is such a nice story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next, though I might have to skip the vore part some if Fink gets hurt XD.

Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report

Thanks a lot! :) I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far!

Not to spoil anything, but a lot of the vore in this story will be approached in the way that it was here. This is mostly about this man's descent into the madness of accepting his innate predatory urges and desires---and dealing with them in his own way. The story is meant to be ongoing for quite some time, so let's just say that the 'climax' is far off yet. :)

Posted by coop500 10 years ago Report

Welcome, your writing skills are quite amazing, truly.

And okay, that's good to know. I will be happily reading it until then though. Again great job on the writing, it's not common to find good writers into things like this.

Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report

Aww, thank you. :) That means a lot. I don't have the most "proper" or concise writing style, but I'm happy to hear that it can be enjoyed despite that.

I'll be sure to warn for anything that needs to be warned for in the tags! Though I'm definitely not into anything like hard!vore, torture, or anything along those lines. I prefer the soft, oral stuff. Just not really the fluffy kind. lol

Again, thank you for your feedback. It means a lot!

Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report

I like how the build up tears into Fakirs mind.

Curious on what will happen in the next chapter.

Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report

Thanks a lot! That's definitely what I was going for. I wanted to explore a pred coming to terms with actually finding out about their predatory nature and how it affects them.

Oddly enough, I've had two more chapters written for months (almost 3), but just haven't gotten around to posting them.

Posted by starrynight 9 years ago Report

This is really interesting. Teacher/student is one of my favorite dynamics in vore, and I love the slow burn in this.

Are you planning to continue this story?

Posted by Chameleonette 9 years ago Report

Thanks a lot! Teacher/student is one of my big vore vices, too. lol

I actually have almost 3 more chapters of this that have been written for months. I just haven't gotten around to posting them as people didn't seem too interested in this story (as there isn't a lot of vore from the get-go). I'll see about fixing the third up today.