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-- Chapter 1: Seeing Red --
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Hey, guys! Chammy here, introducing a new ongoing vore series that I've been meaning to get cracking on!
This story will focus on a relationship between a university professor of creative writing and one of his students. Instead of delving right into gratuitous vore, I decided to explore something I call "vore awakening", which will deal with a predator coming to terms with thoughts and fantasies relating to vore (from shock, doubts, resistances, succumbing and so forth) and how that will change the relationship with his female student as a result. However, how the vore itself is incorporated will remain a secret for now. ;) You might be able to guess it through some of the glaring hints I've already dropped.
The first chapter will not contain any vore, as it's also important to me that I introduce the characters, their personalities, interactions, and struggles (which will also develop as the story goes). And it sets a nice 'base', so to say.
Hope you enjoy it! I'd love to hear feedback on this.
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Chapter 2: http://aryion.com/g4/view/271727
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Posted by TheStatue 10 years ago Report
I love it! You have a great writing style, a lot better than many I've seen on this site (myself included). I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it! Haha, I've been told my writing is often a bit too flowery and over-descriptive with not enough action. But it's not as though I'm a professional, so I just stick to the style I'm comfortable with. :) Glad to hear that you're enjoying it so far! I'll try my best to get on the second chapter soon.
Posted by TheStatue 10 years ago Report
I happen to enjoy a bit of floweriness in my literature, so maybe that's it :) and honestly, if people complain about your writing style, as long as there are no massive grammar errors, just ignore them. Write what you're comfortable with.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
That's true, but I never turn a criticism down unless it's a downright flame. :) I did tell them that it was my style, though, and that I didn't intend to flat-out change it to be more "proper".
Posted by jackson22222 10 years ago Report
So far so good! I like the focus on the inner workings of the characters. It also helps that Ahiru is adorkable.
I'm curious, any plans on drawing the characters interacting, such as drawing scenes from the stories
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! Haha, that's the perfect word to describe her, too.
I might draw them at some point! It all depends on inspiration. And without dropping any hints of what's to come, things get a little more complicated. XD
For now, I'm just trying to focus on the fic itself. My biggest struggle in writing is chapter fics. I tend to not do well with them and lose the fire after a chapter or two. I want to fix that and challenge myself, and this fic is to start that trend, hopefully.
Posted by jackson22222 10 years ago Report
Well then good luck to you on achieving your goal. I am certain you can achieve it.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thank you so much! :) I'll do my best!
Posted by Ephriam 10 years ago Report
Hahah. I like where this is going. It's possible to date students sometimes - I've known a couple of profs who've gotten away with it. There's a trick and a bit of a loophole involved.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thanks! And yeah, I won't say that this will be a hundred percent accurate to how things work in the real modern world---far from it, I'm sure. It's fiction, after all. :)
Posted by adrenaline077 10 years ago Report
Mmmm I'm really excited to see where this is going! I look forward to the nex chapter!
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad you're looking forward to the continuation and I should have the second chapter up by tomorrow. :) I've been really inspired to write this!
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
I imagine the characters from Princess Tutu due to their names.
Good writing so far.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
That was generally what I was going for. Haha.
Thanks!