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or, "That's Not How Republics Work!"
Part 3 of 3 of a short story written for a friend. ~5500 words, F/m, vore, macro/micro.
Becca's idea of a going-away gift for her workmate is more of a present for her than for him.
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Posted by Ethereal 10 years ago Report
That's a very very weird story. But damn cool.
Good job.
Posted by 4ofSwords 10 years ago Report
Thanks on both accounts!
Posted by Chowdown 10 years ago Report
Just did a quick skim. Seems I'll have to read this in earnest. I like transformation too and the stuf around it. Seems interesting.
Posted by 4ofSwords 10 years ago Report
I haven't done too much in the way of Transformation, but it comes up now and again.
Posted by Zwanzik 10 years ago Report
Wowza! It's like non-fatal vore almost!
So it's not really a republic then, is it? It's a dictatorship! Maybe even a fascist state. Hahaaa.
But yeah, awesome story!
Posted by 4ofSwords 10 years ago Report
Perhaps even a socialist collective! (With a monarch.) Thanks! I appreciate it!
Posted by XDDX 10 years ago Report
It's more of a monarchy :D
Posted by 4ofSwords 10 years ago Report
Shhh! Don't tell Michael!
Posted by Ka-Atis 10 years ago Report
That was... indeed interesting. While I'm not able to understand the mindset of pred nor prey, I did enjoy the story. It started out with 'daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw too cute all those little ones' along with the general 'Uh-Oh!', then 'Cool, they still got agency!'
Do you intend to write more about these two, or a new story with a similar concept? I see a whole lot of interesting conflict here, not only between pred and prey and that the prey could cause a lot of trouble for the pred, but also conflict between the micros themselves, as they can present different sides of the prey, like willing versus unwilling.
Anyways. This was great fun.
Posted by 4ofSwords 10 years ago Report
Thanks! As of right now, I think this is probably it for this storyline for me. I do agree there are a lot of different topics that could be explored here; I just have so much else that I want to write already!
Posted by TimObberon 10 years ago Report
This is a great story. Becca is a great predator who balances perfectly between caring and self satisfying. I really enjoyed the ending, because you knew she was going to finish him once and for all. It was sort of romantically tragic?
I would have like to see more on the digestion, but over all I loved the predator and the way she treated her prey.
5/5 ~ Would read again.
Posted by 4ofSwords 10 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!