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Being told you're going to be eaten by a towering feathered behemoth is terrifying, but not enormously surprising beyond the surprise of meeting the gryphon. The fact that Goldeneye just ate all your friends also doesn't help. A beast like this, in short, looks like he's going to not respect your right to not be digested.
And this is very sad, because while he loves to create an effect, the surprise Goldeneye particularly savours is that of someone who until a few minutes ago couldn't imagine the charming avian even nibbling on them. This is one of the reasons he also takes an extremely handsome and dapper anthropomorphised form at times. Not that this prevents him from any of his games. Sure, he's a bit smaller, but just like that he can make you a lot smaller.
A tasty commission for aeznon aeznon , because his fox is so tasty. Also features tatsuaikuchi tatsuaikuchi cameo because he's totally next.
This contains some pretty grim and painful torture, including cooking, digestion, betrayal, and pain. That's right, even the pain is painful.
Taggles: Gryphon griffon griffin fox vulpine m/m shrinking macro/micro vore cooking digestion sadism cruelty restaurant mind control swallowing how many tags do you want you already took the kids
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Posted by sd43 9 years ago Report
Excellent, as always. It was interesting to see a new side of Goldeneye... He seems to have a lot of those, eh?
Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 9 years ago Report
He's a fractal. Infinite sides. I will probably never tell you about the worlds where he's revered as a hero and demigod-esque champion of hope and kindness. Shards have no morality, only what seems most interesting for them at the time.
Thank you. :3 He's more fun when he's evil, anyway.
Posted by sd43 9 years ago Report
Well, evil is always fun! ;)
Posted by Mutton 9 years ago Report
This was actually blacklisted for me, but I read it anyways and damn am I glad I did. The writing is so interesting and the pure sadism. Just, ahhh~
Posted by nephilim 9 years ago Report
Haha, Zeus was black listed? Blasphemy! He is quite a fantastic writer.
Posted by Mutton 9 years ago Report
Oh, no, it wasn't the author, it was the tags. Particularly M/M, mind control, shrinking, I'm usually quite picky, but I agree, the writing is just too good!
Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 9 years ago Report
Mmm, commissioner kinks can take me away from my usual stuff. But I'm glad I managed to make them appealing when they wouldn't usually be. Thank you.
Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 9 years ago Report
You're too kind. Also, I do love that nickname. I should find some way to have it used more often... just like I should reciprocate your adventures and catch up with Danny's misadventures. ;~; Thank you.
Posted by nephilim 9 years ago Report
In due time my dear. Once you start reading, I know you won't stop (;
Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 9 years ago Report
Aww, thank you. It's a pleasure to entertain you, and the sadism was fun to write. Goldeneye likes suffering. Glad it was worth it.
Posted by nephilim 9 years ago Report
Can I say that I like this? Can I?
Because I do. I very much do.
Goldeneye totally has a callously campy appeal in this excerpt. He has an almost Ian Fleming James Bondsian villain-esque vibe. (He would have been hilariously replete with the requisite monocle - in fact, I'm disappointed that there was no monocle in attendance!)
For shame!
Literally, that's the only thing I didn't like. When I kept reading I was /convinced/ that I'd see the monocle emerge.
The brief, yet vital glimpses you give us of the other characters were very, very well done. I liked the chef an awful lot, and I want to see more of his misadventures.
Of course as per usual the writing - technical and creative - was spot on and I have no complaints.
I loved the unbridled sadism and the omnipotence of Goldeneye. Usually the latter removes all interest almost immediately, but somehow you still keep the interest and intrigue very much alive.
So, in short; I really loved this interlude into your version of London and Ian Fleming stage actors (;
Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 9 years ago Report
Honestly, the only I reason I made it real-life-ish was because it needed to be a world where gryphons are a known species, and as we all know, Actura is Not One Of Those. It was nice to do some real-word things, though.
Aaaaaand... damn it. Monocles. Of course. F***ing monocles. I've given him one of those before, no less. Of course he needed one here. Well, you've given it to me, he'll get it next time. One violet eye and one gold-rimmed monocle. Beautiful.
It was also nice to do some other characters, and this also allows me the excuse that I'm practicing writing skills which will be useful in general rather than just doing delicious noms. Glad you liked Kevin the unwary.
Power-wise, I'd have to agree that omnipotence can get stale, and I'd blame A CERTAIN FEW PEOPLE as to why Goldeneye turned from mad entity of potent power to abyssal total genius deity who has at times eaten entire planets. (Those certain people again). My current background is that being a creature of extremely fluctuating... everything... how powerful the Golden Eye is, and how much he can use that power, can vary just as much. There have probably been times when he's even weaker and less powerful/intelligent/massive than most mortals. But heeeyyy, those stories aren't as fun as the god of Ian Fleming fabulosity.
So yes, thank you. I love big meaty comments like these which allow me to wax lyrical about my things. It's a pleasure~