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follow up to Princess Twilight's Turn
Just as promised, Princess Twilight returns to Ponyville to introduce Sunny Shores to the rest of her friends. But after visiting Pinkie Pie results in an unexpected meal for Twilight, it puts a new focus on the rest of the introductions...
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Posted by MisterEbony 10 years ago Report
Nice story!
Posted by Bliss 10 years ago Report
thanks!
Posted by Bailywick 10 years ago Report
Thanks for continuing this series! That'll teach me to remove fics that I thought were Complete from my FimFic Read It Later list.
I agree with your comments about graphic digestion. For all the weird fetishes I have, nothing gets me hotter than informed consent, and a painful acid death just isn't going to be mutually enjoyable. But implied or painless digestion can be fun in lots of new ways, especially if the digestee gets to remain conscious throughout. Taunting someone about turning them into body-part-fat is even hotter when the 'victim' then gets to feel the sensation of *being* that fat (and later tell everyone all about it after getting reformed). When Pinkie in this chapter lamented having to fall asleep because she wouldn't enjoy the digestion part, I half expected Twilight to think "Maybe there's a spell that could fix that..."
I especially liked Rarity's scene, and the way she talks about this bizarre fetish as though it is perfectly normal, since that's what's in vogue these days. It won't be long before she'll have to ask Twilight to eat her just so she can keep up appearances. I also liked that she asked some of those nitpicky "How does it work?" questions that you also did well in A Novel Tale.
Posted by Bliss 10 years ago Report
personally, consent is hardly a requirement for me to enjoy vore. I am totally okay with non consensual vore and terrified prey leading to fatal digestion. I just don't want to see that digestion graphically described is all.
but anyway, I'm glad you like it! and never fear, I have quite a bit more planned for this series, though it may be a while in coming.
I also have two other completely separate one shot vore fics in the works, so keep an eye out for that!
Posted by MutualTaco 10 years ago Report
Huh, read your previous chapters months ago and thought that was it.
Good to see you're continuing it, and that you keep to the characters pretty well.
Posted by Bliss 10 years ago Report
Nope, it's gonna keep going!
and yeah, I try my hardest to keep everypony in character. Even for something as amazingly out of left field as vore.
Posted by DarkLantern 10 years ago Report
All three of these are great. I can't wait to see more.