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It's a new episode of Mad Science Kink! Today we tackle one of the first suggestions made by a viewer!
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This is another one of those where I realized I'd have the time to put ONE MORE story up before work and the holidays swallowed my life for the foreseeable future. I wasn't able to proof read it before collapsing, so it's probably riddled with errors.
And if you have any Mad Science Kink experiments you'd like to see, yell them out. We are supported by viewers like you.
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Posted by Drizztt44 10 years ago Report
Hahahahaha that was awsome. AF and SV together, I love how you think.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Glad you like it, but I can't take full credit. The "viewer suggestion" stuff was sort of breaking the fourth wall. A comment on (http://aryion.com/g4/view/275617) suggested this scenario.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 10 years ago Report
Amazing ending!
Even though it might cost them a bit with the vacuum to restore him later, I like the idea of her just leaving him in there like that for a bit, especially if he isn't needed for their next experiment, and with him already this compact and squished, it winds up compacting him and his contents into a shape more convenient to fit in a vagina. So for a while, she has him as basically a big sex toy with another squished person wiggling inside.
Even better, if she makes this decision on the spot as a result (or using the excuse of) seeing a viewer request it right after the last video, before she got a chance to take him out.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
A viewer request like YOURS? The lines between reality and fantasy are blurring!
I'm glad you liked the ending. It was a complete afterthought.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 10 years ago Report
Perhaps that's why it felt so natural and spontaneous. It wasn't part of the plan, she just did it on impulse. Ultimately... that's what fantasy and fetish are to me, and why I enjoy them so much. The clean cut limits of reality get to seem malleable for a while. I just loved how she invoked that excuse already, saying "It's what the viewers want!" Of course, I actually wouldn't want her to do that to him if she thought it would really make him upset, but that's up to you as the author.
By the way, your stories are in a lot of ways just my favorite way of thinking of vore, and you've quickly become one of my favorite authors. Every time I see a new story from you, even the short disconnected ones, I get excited like a kid hearing about a new game or toy, and can't wait to read it. I wish you an awesome Christmas!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I'm glad you like my stuff. I'll bet I get just as excited about new comments as you do about new stories. I just wish life wouldn't keep throwing wrenches in the works I'm going to try my darnedest to get another quickie done before the end of the year, but that might be it... though I've been wrong before. Merry Christmas to you, too!
Posted by RLord4268 10 years ago Report
Absolutely everything I hoped it would be! Great Job man.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! And thanks for making the suggestion!
Posted by gersen 10 years ago Report
The long awaited sequel does not disappoint, thanks! Suspected involvement in the future of Mark as an object, but did not realize that so ... unusual. In the past, he took out all ... I wonder who will get it? I am especially glad the presence of the heroes of the first four-part series, each of them has their own tastes and beliefs. Thank you for both of these series of short stories in this genre, you're the best and the only one!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
Posted by zaqplmsk 10 years ago Report
Wow, I only just found this series of yours and I have to say it, god damn you to hell for being such a good writer of erotic science fiction! I legitimately want to see this device in reality, and not just for sex! Hell, when I get better at drawing and writing, I plan on making a (not overly sexual) superhero comic series with various original heroes, and I'd like to use the hyperdimensional transflector in ray gun form as the "tool" of choice for a short, athletic brunet who may or may not end up being named Julia. If I ever do get around to doing this, do I have your blessing for using your characters and device in this yet to be named series I have cooking up in my head?
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Sure, you've got my blessing to use the HDTF and the characters in your potential comic. All I ask is that you share any artwork that results with me. (It'd be super cool to see what you come up with.) And if you ever launch to superstardom, don't forget your ol' buddy marloweny.
Posted by zaqplmsk 10 years ago Report
Oh, I'll probably have a couple sketches by late spring, along with a couple pages of notes. The HDTF is only going to be one of many things at their disposal, but it'll play a part in at least a few of the "episodes".
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Cool!
Posted by zaqplmsk 10 years ago Report
As the creator of the HDTF, would you like to toss me a few ideas as to just what their other devices may be? I got a few myself, but I'd like to see what you throw my way.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
What sort of stuff did you have in mind? Just general "bending the laws of physics for the purposes of superheroism" sort of stuff?
Posted by zaqplmsk 10 years ago Report
Eh, if it's sciencey, I'm all ears. Just letting you know though, seventh dimensional beings WILL come into play, and alternate 3rd dimensions shall be discovered. And Julia may or may not accidentally kill the leader of a world of superpowered beings.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Eh. Can't make an omelet without breaking a few eggs. Sorry to say I'm coming up dry on the subject of gadgets. Been a rough week at work and the worst is yet to come. If I get any brainstorms I'll let you know, but as it is I'm hoping to squeeze out one last story of some kind before Christmas.
Posted by zaqplmsk 10 years ago Report
Eh, Cest' la vi.
Posted by SuntMan 10 years ago Report
Like all the other; a marvelous chapter, bravo.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks!