Yeah, because it is possible for charlie to never even disappear after some time being rewelped/birthed, which might be easy to explain to her mom, but it would resolve Erin being the only furry in school, lol
Very nice! I really like how this was actually *more* willing on the side of the prey than on the side of the predator. Bonus points for also being non-sexual, especially given their age.
If there's anything at all I'd say could use a bit of improvement, it's that the characters spoke and acted much more maturely than I expected some 13 year olds to display. Maybe I just don't remember how I was when I was 13.
I felt so bad for Charlene when she started to cry, but I'm glad she was happy. Usually children in vore can be off putting but you did it really well. You really have created one of my favorite fictional settings of all time here. I never want the stories to end. Now I have to go read the Outfoxed 2 series.
Posted by zarpaulus 10 years ago Report
She might want to ask "mom" for a favor now.
Posted by Imrhys 10 years ago Report
Yeah, because it is possible for charlie to never even disappear after some time being rewelped/birthed, which might be easy to explain to her mom, but it would resolve Erin being the only furry in school, lol
Posted by SirScotty 10 years ago Report
Very nice! I really like how this was actually *more* willing on the side of the prey than on the side of the predator. Bonus points for also being non-sexual, especially given their age.
If there's anything at all I'd say could use a bit of improvement, it's that the characters spoke and acted much more maturely than I expected some 13 year olds to display. Maybe I just don't remember how I was when I was 13.
Posted by Imrhys 10 years ago Report
Oh ho! You are back to work in this setting, even if just for a little while :)
And since this is not fatal and can be roundabout "reversed"... <3
Posted by Ome 10 years ago Report
I felt so bad for Charlene when she started to cry, but I'm glad she was happy. Usually children in vore can be off putting but you did it really well. You really have created one of my favorite fictional settings of all time here. I never want the stories to end. Now I have to go read the Outfoxed 2 series.