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Rill, the three headed serpent, decides she knows a fitting way to keep Trixie the Succubus from breaking Philo's heart again.
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This is fan art of a little known Wattpad thing by the author who has fueled my imagination for a while now. Since he seems to have abandoned this setting again I went ahead and wrote what I think should come next.
Edit: As wisely pointed out, I should include a link. Warning, it's quite long and doesn't end properly. If you read it, you may find the style familiar, because I've been doing my best to duplicate his style for... Like three years now.
http://www.wattpad.com/story/14635463-between
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Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report
If the Wattpad story is public-facing, how about a link to it so folks can read it first?
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Good thinking. Added it.
Posted by Thanatos2k 10 years ago Report
Don't worry, now you have a healing battery in your stomach.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Very True.
Posted by threk 10 years ago Report
Lol, this is the first time I've ever seen the FFF/F tag rather than F/FFF.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Heh, yeah. I remembered thinking, "Well, technically this makes sense..."
Posted by BNCrazy 8 years ago Report
Your diction alone coins you as a writer. You do a great job of giving us what we want while still keeping it surprising. This was a delicious little tale. I've never considered hydra vore before, the sharing of the victim's flavor. And I enjoyed the size you chose to of the hydra pred; just barely large enough to squeeze her in. Beautiful. I also enjoyed how you did the names of the Rill: Right!Rill/Left!Rill. Very clever. Where did you come up with that? I want so bad to steel it for my writing, but I have no idea how/where I'd use it (I generally write hard sci-fi). Anyway, excellent work to say the least!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
This was technically fan-fiction for characters created by an author I like. There's a link in the description. He was the one who named them thusly. I think he said somewhere he got it from the website tv-tropes, though I don't know where exactly on the page he saw it. In the final version of the story he switched to Left-Rill/Right-Rill instead of Left!Rill and Right!Rill, but the online part of the story is still this way.
Glad you liked it, by the way.
Posted by BNCrazy 8 years ago Report
I don't think my last comment wen't through so I'll post again just in case: I thoroughly enjoyed this unique piece. Your well employed diction easily coins you as an accomplished writer. Using a hydra who shares the flavor of their victim was as creative as it was erotic. I also enjoyed that you chose for the hydra to be just big enough to barely choke her buxom prey down. You were able to give us what we want while still delivering nice surprises. And where did you come up with your naming scheme for Rill? The was genius! I so want to steal it, but I ave no idea how I'd use it for my writing (I mainly do hard sci-fi like ALIENS). Excellent work and thank you very much for sharing!
Posted by BNCrazy 8 years ago Report
That's odd. Right after I posted, my other message showed back up... still new to this, I guess.
Posted by Ev0nix 2 years ago Report
Thanks for introducing us to that story! This is very good too!