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A bit of explanation. The thing that got me started writing my little stories was a book series called THE BOOK OF DEACON. The author is a really nice guy and has answered all of my emails to him. His work is not very romantic and entirely devoid of sex, but there's one scene in the third book of his series where it is generally agreed among us fans that the main character made love "off camera". I talked about this scene with him and, without going too much into details of HOW it occurred, this short story is the result.
To understand the context of the story, Myranda just finished a battle in which one of her allies (Lain) was possessed by one of their enemies (Epidime) and the resulting battle nearly claimed their lives. A group of rebels (The Undermine) helped rescue them and the leader of that group (Caya) maneuvered Myranda and Deacon (her love interest) into sharing a tent for the night. Another ally (Ivy) starts playing the violin once they're inside.
This doesn't contain any vore whatsoever, but it is the piece I dissect whenever I want to write a sex scene which is more about love than lust. You'll recognize some of my most frequently used phrases in there.
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Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
I love this story, mmm a book series called The book of Deacon, never heard of it, sorry but i think it needs another ending your wrote like a vore scan at the last lines.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I could write a vore version i guess. The next scene in the book has Myranda's pet dragon smell them upon waking and clearly be displeased by what she smells. Could have the dragon (Myn) eat Deacon as punishment, or... I don't know. Stuff.
Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
that will be cool.
Posted by Imrhys 10 years ago Report
I was poking around someone else's fav's, found some other stuff of yours, then found This. Erotic sensual play is sort of what I live for, lol, and with how rare it is I find anything like this little piece... mmmmm, lovely, loved it, yummy. I can see why you dissect it each time you want to write something more loving than lust based.
Though I've combined those two rather yummily here and there through the years. Nothing quite like two long apart lovers getting that howling lust out of the way at first reunion, then spend the next few days curled up so close hard to tell them apart :)
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Wow! I'm super happy to know you enjoyed this! It was the one story I was sure didn't belong here, and one that I feel comes the closest to being something akin to real literature.
Posted by Imrhys 10 years ago Report
There is a good reason for the differences between the terms "porn" and "erotica," and I tend to prefer the later. Here...
http://aryion.com/g4/view/292812
That is my latest, and though I'd hardly call it "literature," I hope it shows why I so enjoyed your piece while on a fetish site. I see no reason why porn and erotica cannot exist side-by-side on a fetish site.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I actually went to your profile and read this not long ago! A potent piece of writing. Dense with feeling. I might try for another piece of "erotica" in the future, this time with vore, but it's exhausting to write well. At least for me.
Posted by Imrhys 10 years ago Report
I find almost all writing I do exhausting due to my writing comes from my emotions. I have to dig down and find similar feelings to what a character is experiencing or I cannot write the scene x.x
I wish you luck with writing more.
And thank you for your kind words as well about my writing ^^