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Hot hungry jock pred sees new girl at school and immediately is hungry and attracted to her. She'd be a super filling meal full sized.
Second short story written by a prompt I was given on tumblr. I managed to make this one shorter, but it's still over 3 pages. This one is more or less just some gratuitous vore.
Also here on tumblr: http://thecameleonette.tumblr.com/post/113821830843/hot-hungry-jock-pred-sees-new-girl-at-school-and
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Posted by Ashley_Urikoshima 10 years ago Report
Certainly a most heated engagement, making a sudden urge of vore quite pleasant to read indeed! <3 And I'm not even that much into the finality of the vore, but it definitely kept me reading until the end. Good stuff!
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Wow, I'm glad you thought so and extra glad that you enjoyed it! :) Thank you very much!
Posted by TW 10 years ago Report
Yes yes yes! Great job on the mindset of the predator on this one. I loved how you drew out his agonizing over the week, how he had to have her and was forced to wait... Well done.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! The prompt lent itself more toward an immediate attraction/hunger, so I didn't build on the relationship in this one as much as I generally like to. (Plus, these were meant to be quickies. lol) But I'm glad you enjoyed the little details along the way. :) Thanks!
Posted by StrawberryStereo 10 years ago Report
This was so hot
\\\. Chammy you don't disappoint.
What do you think of the idea that a predator endulges in a girl he finds particularly delicious but keeps her as a pet/slave so he never loses his little morsel and her sweet taste and lets her out only to torment her and eat her again and again? :3
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :)
That's a cute idea, but not really my sort of thing, I'm afraid! I'd read it, but it's not something I would write. I'm not a fan of safe vore. Without the danger aspect there, vore falls flat for me, since the prey already knows they're going to be fine.
Posted by Toxic_Crayon_Girl 10 years ago Report
Your M/F vore is the best! I loved every word! Thank you :D
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Aww, thank you very much! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
Good descriptions of devouring I say.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! I certainly put the most I can into writing the vore parts, since that's pretty much the climax of everything.
Posted by puck5 10 years ago Report
I would feel bad for Ninia but honestly I feel she made a better meal than a person.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Sean would certainly agree with you. lol