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Pinkie loves her sweets, but what happens when it all runs out?
A special request by a certain artist, I'll reserve his name unless you already know, then hey, more power to you.
Longest one-shot I've written to date, yeesh.
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Posted by threk 8 years ago Report
Love it :D
Posted by MutualTaco 8 years ago Report
Thanks, doc.
Posted by PegaSUS 8 years ago Report
Fantastic work! I always loved how the characters in your stories stay surprisingly... in character! This almost sounds like some episode from the show, haha.
Though, I feel I'm missing something about Saturday. Do Fluttershy and Twilight loosely reference something they schedule (or know is scheduled) at the time? Sounds like I should know by now...
Aside from that, I love the load of details you provide for your wonderful stories like this.~ A F/FFFFFun read! (I've never seen that many "F"s in a tag before, haha!) Again, excellent job with your longest one-shot!
Posted by randyrules711 8 years ago Report
I think the references to Saturday were talking about how new episodes air on Saturday.
Posted by PegaSUS 8 years ago Report
Yeah, that was also on the back of my mind when asking that question. I just felt it was something more... abnormal, haha.
I guess that's just it! The doozies happen on the weekend.
Posted by MutualTaco 8 years ago Report
Sure, I'll go with that.
Posted by MutualTaco 8 years ago Report
Just realized there were 2 too many F's in that tag, ONE DAY.
Posted by vorelectric 8 years ago Report
A great story I admit, but from a writing perspective it felt a bit...chopped up.
It's fine in all to change perspective in the middle of a story (As in one character's 3rd person point of view to another character's third person point of view) but you did it so much in this story that it kind of drove me out of the moment most of the time.
Other than that, I once again have to applaud you on your work. You punch out way more stories than I could ever hope to match at this point.
Posted by MutualTaco 8 years ago Report
Yeah, this story got me out of a lot of my comfort zones in story telling, so your feelings are definitely merited.
The method of storytelling I do deals VERY poorly with multiple characters, especially since one of them was hallucinating. I've been tempted to break out of my way of piecing together stories, but I haven't really invested time into it since I'm more concerned with throwing out stories faster than I can count.
I'll definitely work on this if I have the right mind to though, thanks!