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Emma finally gives birth to her three daughters. Will it be like a regular birth? probably not.
*Post reading notes*
UUHG! Rebirth is so weird! I’ve never thought about it before and it felt weirdly hard to get my idea across. Even now I’m not convinced I did a good job.
I was actually making plans to go with option 1 before I decided to go with #2. If I had decided to go the other direction with the story Rachel would have eaten and digested both Emma and X-23 after convincing the latter. Fallowed by Rachel confessing her love to Kitty.
That plan sort of fell apart after I realized that Laura had six indestructible metal blades in her limbs that would still be around after she was digested. And I kind of already established in X-Bellies 2 that the stomach only has a holding capacity of one person.
But what really pushed me into choosing #2 was my new friend Apostolos. Who actually joined the site to weigh in on my decision. I’m super complimented that someone likes my story that much. Thank you my friend. Thank you very much.
And for those of you who wanted #1… next chapter's gonna have vore.
Posted by Apostolos 10 years ago Report
Aw man that was amazing there. Is the next one gonna be like an alternate timeline or something?
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
To that I can safely say Hell no! In my experience alternate timelines are just annoying. All I meant is that I'm promising straight Vore in the next chapter
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Posted by Apostolos 10 years ago Report
Oh I thought ... Okay may I guess the participants of this exciting event to come?
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
Sure. Go ahead
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Posted by Apostolos 10 years ago Report
Let's see...
1. Kitty vores Storm maybe anally as either an accident or the result of a prank. They either try to get her out using a teleporting mutant or using Kitty's phasing to leave storm in a spot when Kitty leaves the room with 50/50 odds of success to failure. While this happens Emma learns about Laura's feelings for the other characters or a single character.
2. Maybe the school gains some new students (possible OC introduction scenario here) some of which try to assert their dominance over other students with varying levels of success until they are physically restrained by Emma, Rachel, Kitty, and Rouge. The students that weren't defeated either receive punishment or praise for their actions in the skirmishes prior, the actions being defensive or offensive in nature .
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
The Idea of introducing my own character never crossed my mind. I kind of like it.
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Posted by Apostolos 10 years ago Report
Thanks, I was wondering whether it would cross your mind after consuming multiple characters if you would add characters from others like as a prize competition. Maybe each week you could select a winner or two from the entrees to join the school and interact with the already present characters.
(I guess I'm beating around the bush here about wanting to create any kinds of OC's)
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
I'm not really comfortable with using other people's characters.
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Posted by Apostolos 10 years ago Report
Oh okay then there goes that idea. Oh by the way do you have a dva account?
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
Yeah, but I don't really use it except to bypass the mature content filter
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Posted by Apostolos 10 years ago Report
Think you could check something I wrote there a while back? I don't think many people know of it yet and I would like some advice on it.
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
sure, what's your profile name?
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Posted by Apostolos 10 years ago Report
JagermeisterXTC, it had a nice ring to it also I did the entire thing on my notebook in pencil then did it on my iPad that I'm using now so the indents were screwed up
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
It's called "Prologue: and so it Begins" right?
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Posted by Apostolos 10 years ago Report
Yes it is. Sorry about the late response I was a bit busy.
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
I PM'd my critique you. I think. Tell me if you don't get it.
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