A figure from Emma's past returns to kill her. How can this end for you heroes? Probably with vore.

*Post reading notes*
Me upon starting this chapter: Oh it's just like three scenes, how long could this chapter take?
Me a week and a half later: I'm just now getting to the sex? What the hell happened?

So here we have it. The longest chapter I've ever written. Eighteen pages in a word document compared to the the twelve page X-Bellies 4. This was easily twice as long what I'm comfortable with.

I'm gonna need a few days break before I even think of starting on the next one.

OK. On to the important stuff.
While I was writing the third chapter (Which is when this became a series instead of a two-parter) I knew that I wanted to throw Selene into the mix somewhere considering that she actually eats people in the comics.
The original idea I had for her was to make her the final antagonist of the series and have her collect the souls of those that died via digestion and bring them back as shadow warriors(?) But I ditched that idea after I realized I was introducing an antagonist for the sake of having an enemy to defeat.
I split Rogue and Mystique apart because I was feeling kind of guilty trapping Mystique in Rogue's body for so long. Rouge gets to keep her new powers because she was my Waifu when I first discovered comics and I still love her to this day.

This is also the closest I'm comfortable with to actually making a rape scene.

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