Posted by PegaSUS 9 years ago Report

I love your concept of magically tightening the space inside the predator to hide who's inside, more or less. (At least up to a certain number of characters!) I like how Twilight's belly is still described to be bloated at the end even with the intestines practically air-vacuumed, haha.

And of course Discord would be the one behind the idea. I guess she'll learn to be patient and not overlook anything next time!

Excellent short! These are always fun to read. Keep it up!

Posted by MutualTaco 9 years ago Report

Thanks, this was a very spontaneous story that I hammered out in a few hours, so glad it was fine.

If I had more time, a lot more fluids would have been flying about.

Posted by PegaSUS 9 years ago Report

Your writing speed is amazing. My only hope at making something close to this would be taking it seriously for a few days. I'm sure this is more than fine!

And more fluids, huh?

"Meanwhile, Princess Twilight Sparkle is putting out a house fire with..."

Posted by MutualTaco 9 years ago Report

Don't give me weird ideas, you know what happens when people do that.

Posted by PegaSUS 9 years ago Report

"...She eventually lost control but gained it back as she is now able to float around as if using a flyboard. Kids across town think it looks fun."

(Okay, I'm done.)

Posted by Anabiosis7 9 years ago Report

If someone give you a weird idea, you probably will write a weird story.
Anyway, good and crazy as always.